Journal: The Others -------------------------------------------
I currently use EliteSkills as my first draft site. If anyone is interested in commenting on my work, I will exchange comments with you. Please be sure to send me a message after you've commented on a piece of mine (constructed criticism required) and I'll return the favor. I am also on AllPoetry.com and PoetFreak.com with my more polished and revised writes. This is still my first home and love it so. Hit me up if you're interested in my Facebook as well (make sure you let me know where you are from, i
Author unknown means what it says. I received this poem in an email from a friend of mine, he in turn received it from his friend in New Zealand. No author was mentioned. I also cracked a smile about it so I posted it. I'll probably delete it soon. I just thought I'd give some of my friends here on ES a laugh. If you like humor and would like to read something that is actually mine I suggest 'Persuasion'. I think you'll find its grammatical syntax a lot less questionable. As to the request for counseling I thought it might add to the presentations humorous impact. After all hill-billy inbreeding is not all that funny!!
Thank you for the comment on Battles in Space. I can assure you, it was not at all forced. It was very much honest, and an expression of how I often sit and perceive my life. Being a Sci Fi geek, seeing yourself as a ship in space having to doge her ass off to avoid being shot to pieces by all the ass-wipes out there really isn`t something I have to force at all, it`s pretty much the reality of things. Well, my reality, anyhow. And that`s what we all write about, isn`t it? Our reality and how we view the world?
It brings a smile to my face to think that I’ve inspired anything. I’ll make sure to check out your page often in hopes of seeing the outcome. I’m assuming you going to plan a series of Haiku which combine to make a larger free-verse poem?