--Elite Writer Alias: I_Bleed_Ink Name: Katelyn D ASL: Pretty Lady Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 1 Life Story: A Work In Progress [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks for comment on 'What to know'! I'm not surprised it is obscure. Many people would find it obscure if I explained those concepts for a week with references and drawings and graphs! My sonnets are about a new way of looking at old religious concepts. Non supernatural. If you don't understand the evolution of matter and the Darwinian Modern Synthesis, they are hard to get the depth of; and the evolution of the divine spirit is (I find) impossible to talk about without confusion, except very rarely. Religiion and philosophy are both such a ball of worms ... I think this is my only really obscure sonnet, though. The others are better because everybody can get something out of them. This bad poem will also cause some other good poems, so I cannot apologise! But thanks for your attention! And good luck with exams.
Oh - yes, it's a sort of English sonnet, but I think I'm messing with the verseform a lot, trying to find out how a poet today ought to treat it! Sonnets appeared at almost the same moment of history as Modern English. They fascinate me! Every generation has a new look at sonnets and some other traditions; and I have found that readers are fond of them too. I like to write free verse, but most people who are not poets themselves like to read lyrical verse!
Thanks for the critique on Down. You're right, it does sound strange now that I look at it from another's perspective. However, it took me a few minutes to right, thus, I have little ambition to put too much effort into editing it. Thank you though.
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Sweets!
I'll get back to your page later to read some of your works.
Many thanks for your critique. I have updated "Sweet Crumbs."
I used "universalited" since it signifies an opening up of the word (love) to include all its ramifications and idiosyncrazes. The word (universalized) signifies that all languages have the word (love) yet it does not signify all of its depths of expressions and emotions.
My word (fondulations)means there are mental pictures of how to accomplish the moment at hand.
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. I hope that she lives a good life in the pound in the sky.
