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Journal: -------------------------------------------Mood: The Usual    Been a while since I've updated. Preparing to take the GRE this Sept. Finishing up portfolios. Jadey's been illustrating some of my poems, which has been a lovely exercise, can't wait to see how many we get through. I'm sitting at work, sleepy and contemplative....going back and forth between a few poems and tweaking. Have I ever mentioned that I hate sonnets? I really do. Already getting geared up for Val's wedding. Hopefully the dress will be atleast a little flattering, not that Missy's was terrible, but I skip past the photos of me in the damn thing. Bright pink, busty, and not the best waist line. I'm tempted to get married just to dress my friends up in crap they'll never wear again, either. Ok, enough tapping away at this silent, staring thing. ...Created 2009-08-03 18:08:27     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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Eh, a critic is always welcome and add on's too ^.^

| Posted on 2009-08-20 16:47:00 | by Scaredheart - [ Reply to This ] -

I didn't think of it that way >.> Thank you for the add on, but this basically was a class written Essay about Americans consisting of the USA, but with that new tidbit of input I now want to re write the report with that Wish I had gotten that a few days ago.

| Posted on 2009-08-19 18:54:35 | by Scaredheart - [ Reply to This ] -

Yep, spelling error. Should have said atrapar - thats what I get for using spanish spell check instead of just re-reading it myself. Thanks for the help!!

| Posted on 2009-08-19 12:55:37 | by raincloud - [ Reply to This ] -

Looking at it again, I think you're right about the other line as well. I will mull over it some more. :)

| Posted on 2009-08-18 07:44:54 | by Civilian - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi (searches for name at top of page)... Katelyn. Thanks for commenting on 'My Gemini' and especially for the suggestions. I'm not sure about ditching the first line of the second stanza ('Don't you remember our garden'), just because if I do leave it out some of the strength of the dichotomy between the garden and the house itself may be lost. For me, that needs to be made explicit for the reader not to just assume the whole thing is a single 'entity'. Which it kind of is, and kind of isn't in terms of the poem. However, I'm a lot more receptive to cutting the first line. Looking at it now, I wasn't sure why I even included it! I think I wrote it before I had come up with a title, so wanted to bring in some mention of a 'shared upbringing'. Of course, the title already accomplishes that, so the line is obsolete. Thanks for your input, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it :) I'll check out your page asap, probably in a week or so when the current front of university work has blown over. All the best, Ben

| Posted on 2009-08-18 07:40:09 | by Civilian - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi (searches for name at top of page)... Katelyn. Thanks for commenting on 'My Gemini' and especially for the suggestions. I'm not sure about ditching the first line of the second stanza ('Don't you remember our garden'), just because if I do leave it out some of the strength of the dichotomy between the garden and the house itself may be lost. For me, that needs to be made explicit for the reader not to just assume the whole thing is a single 'entity'. Which it kind of is, and kind of isn't in terms of the poem. However, I'm a lot more receptive to cutting the first line. Looking at it now, I wasn't sure why I even included it! I think I wrote it before I had come up with a title, so wanted to bring in some mention of a 'shared upbringing'. Of course, the title already accomplishes that, so the line is obsolete. Thanks for your input, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it :) I'll check out your page asap, probably in a week or so when the current front of university work has blown over. All the best, Ben

| Posted on 2009-08-18 07:39:48 | by Civilian - [ Reply to This ] -

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