--Elite Writer Alias: Imadjinn Name: Brian Neff ASL: 17/M/Neverwhere Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 1310 Life Story: Imagine life [ Ignore User ]
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its quite safe to say that i have been busy. retardedly busy. to the point of running my immune system into the ground and being sick for a week while i try to work at the same time. ugh.
men-brains was on purpose... i was stretching it a little further than it prolly ought to be stretched but i was playing on membranes and human brains lol
Tahnks for your opinion dude, but honestly, there's a purpose behind my spacing. I always write as I hear myself saying it in my head, breaking the lines down based on where I see myself naturally pausing. I don't need syllable structure or even line breaks for free form, stream of thought poetry. Poetry can exist in so many different ways, but as long as you have some substance to what your writing and not complete filler, then you're alright. Anyway, I just wish you had commented more on the substance than the structure, but everyone is a stickler for something I guess.
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