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Thanks for the comment, I was going for the gross out in the first quatrain.
"I don't need to blow bubbles when I snore"- I meant blood bubbles. I don't need to blow bubbles, I need to dream.
"Thread em' through the horned gate, not ivory" who is "them"?- The 'them' is my dreams. Bad dreams come through the ivory, good dreams are threaded through the horned gate. This ties back to Phobetor, one of on Oneiroi.
and also, thanks a lot for the comment on "the dry romance of waiting". you were spot on in your interpretation. and thanks for the little critiquing nitpicks, they should be very useful when i next edit the poem.
I'm glad you liked my newbie piece...
and that there was a stanza you really liked...
thank You for taking the time to give me your thoughts on it....
The last lines that you didn't under stand is where Jack Daniels was made and on the label of the bottle is NO.7 and the ending line means I rate Jack Daniels between a 1 to 10...i give it an 11
One day when you are older you might try it and see what i mean...
It's really late here and i haven't slept yet...But once i'm rested up i will return and read some of your poetry....
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