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Name: Kristine A
ASL: 20/F/AZ
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Life Story: Falling forward
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I love being writer. What I can't stand is all the paperwork. - Peter De Vries


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Thanks a lot Kristine for the comment you made on my piece "Manufactured Emotions" it made me smile :)

You are on the right path, it does have to do with looking at things the same way people have approach them for ages. But also it's got to do with the fact that our conceptions, thoughts and wishes are standard and traditional. For a while I've been deeply discombobulated by the fact that we are heavily inclined to wish what others have wished. For instance the issue of having a family, a car or a partner. It puzzles me that we are not original when it comes to our necessities, to put it that way .... that's was more less what I intended to convey ... not sure if I succeeded though. My writes tend to be a slightly not to say utterly personal.
The headgear designer was a sort of alleged metaphor to explain how we hanker after the same things.

Thanks again for the comment you made.

Warm regards,

Ethan
| Posted on 2009-03-15 17:46:17 | by Ethan Brody - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hi Kristine. Thank you for the review. I'm glad that you liked the piece.
| Posted on 2008-03-30 04:15:42 | by ANGELO - [ Reply to This ] -
  
It's no problem. That ought to be what we're here for, right? Let me know if you need a comment on anything else; I'll give it a shot.

--crimson
| Posted on 2007-11-07 18:18:43 | by crimson echo - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for the comment, I was going for the gross out in the first quatrain.

"I don't need to blow bubbles when I snore"- I meant blood bubbles. I don't need to blow bubbles, I need to dream.

"Thread em' through the horned gate, not ivory" who is "them"?- The 'them' is my dreams. Bad dreams come through the ivory, good dreams are threaded through the horned gate. This ties back to Phobetor, one of on Oneiroi.

Thanks again!
Krys
| Posted on 2007-11-03 10:10:57 | by ruinedsnapshots - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hi!! Thanks for the comment! I revised this poem a bit and appreciate your input. Thanks!!
| Posted on 2007-08-09 17:05:40 | by lmz - [ Reply to This ] -
  
wow happy 777th day!

and also, thanks a lot for the comment on "the dry romance of waiting". you were spot on in your interpretation. and thanks for the little critiquing nitpicks, they should be very useful when i next edit the poem.
| Posted on 2007-08-07 20:01:22 | by Icarus - [ Reply to This ] -



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