--Elite Writer Alias: Inkybro Name: King Inkybro ASL: 17/M/Oklahoma Website:[ Education ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 3738 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
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thats a tough question to answer! u have snow in some parts.. humid and warm weather in some... and where i stay.. which is the captal.. its cold but dry. the temp comes down to a few degrees above zero.. but their aint ever any snow.. :)
Hey thanks for all the comments they really made my day :)
You mentioned something about not knowing what it is about my writing that's different--I was thinking about it and I'm not really sure either, but I know that I like to use concrete ideas like tangible objects instead of just writing down ambiguous thoughts. So in the dream poem instead of just saying "I have cool dreams," I put in a lot of abstract images to make it sound cooler.
Hmm let's see i'm trying to answer all your questions haha. The "go-od" thing that was separated was supposed to sound sort of like it said "God" because I was just starting to have issues at that time with people who pretend they're compassionate Christians and care about people, when really they are just insincere and try to look like they care. I don't know, it was a weird thing that I don't think anyone would really understand so I might change it.
You were right about the "future self" poem...it was mostly just me sitting there thinking, "well, i'm in school and working my ass off now, and what for? just to grow old and pay bills and be a slave to the man?" haha. so yeah it was a little depressed, but have yet to experience actually paying bills.
Anyway, as this is a very long comment I think I'll end it before you fall asleep at your keyboard reading it.
But thanks again for all the comments! As writers it is always nice to get a boost on our writing :) haha