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Journal: -------------------------------------------Mood: The Usual    If you leave a comment on one of my poems, and I don't get back to you for a few days...I will, eventually. I don't always have time to visit eliteskills, I wish I did. Be patient with me :] ...Created 2007-01-29 19:18:47     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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Thank you very much for the comment and the constructive criticism. I really appreciate ideas like that the most. I was originally going to put it into stanzas, but I decided not to at the last minute. Though I was thinking about the one word lines as going at the end of the stanza instead of the beginning. I didn't put one at the end, because I thought it looked tacky, personally. But I never really thought about putting it before the stanzas that is a good idea. Your Beautiful Nightmare, Lilithe Amara Aislin

| Posted on 2007-05-03 08:32:17 | by Lilithe_Aislin - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi there, thanks for the fave addition on my latest. Care to leave a comment why you liked it so much? I'm interested to know, that's all. I'll be back when I can after a few days to look through your stuff... a bit busy right now. Thanks again, Jase

| Posted on 2007-02-01 20:29:56 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -

xD How's life been for yah.

| Posted on 2007-01-30 22:10:49 | by Mieko - [ Reply to This ] -

Yay!! <3 You're alive~

| Posted on 2007-01-29 21:10:18 | by Mieko - [ Reply to This ] -

The fourth stanza is supposed to mean that she has given up, and she only wants to be seen as this fake image that she portrays, because she can't stand how shes been trying and trying to get this other person to see her for who she is, so she's given up...you were pretty much right:) Thanks for the comment:) Sam

| Posted on 2007-01-29 20:09:56 | by Falling Rain - [ Reply to This ] -

thanks for the favs addition im glad you liked it rather made my day sometime soon i will get around to reading some more of you rwork looking forward to it

| Posted on 2007-01-29 19:59:51 | by digitalflower - [ Reply to This ] -

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