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    thanks so much for your comment, I sorta saw what you meant even when I was writng haha, guess I got lazy... But thanks so much, because I added a bit more, just to finish off the senses. Hope you like it now!
    | Posted on 2006-12-14 00:00:00 | by Castalia - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey can you explain to me how my poem samsara is um sentimental. I really need some critick to say something to me about my poem cuz this poem to me is my best one ever right now but no one is really reading it and commeting about it and i really need some kind of feed back

    please and thank you
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by Deep_slow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for your comments on my sonnet "Spider" ... actually, the poem was not designed for a great deal of "sense", it is more of a fun romp...
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by Algol46 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Tom, thanks for your comments on "The House On Brannon Hill"! The poem uses poetic license, and is meant to be a sort of comfortable didactic poem, something like having coffee with friends and in the course of conversation discussing what a genuinely good guy old Jed was. Happy Holidays to you and yours!
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the comment.. alot of lyrics are just here it is and thats that, without putting creative writting in it...
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by His goth child - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    because winter has lost it's taste (meaning flavor, spirit, anything it used to be when i was little) covers everything, whereas describing things like hot chocolate and cranberries is meaningless to me. simple is better. simple gets the meaning across without flowery language.
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by shmurr - [ Reply to This ] -



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