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JAvery


Name: Jennifer Avery
ASL: 30/F/Calhoun, GA
Website:[ Website ]
Blog: [ Blog ]
Days Away: 5033
Life Story: Inarticulate doctors
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Signup Date: 6099 D
16.71 Years 1.67 Quote:
"Much talk means much exhaustion. Better far it is to keep your thoughts." Lao Tzu


Recent Favorites:
Miss Holiday Golightly by Icarus
Jack's Ghost by RodeoClown
The Dance of Beatnik Bill by RodeoClown
"On Love Poems" by Sir Jimeth
Through My Window by oixi
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Editing

Mood: Thinking...
  
Time to edit the shit out of my novel. I kind of look forward to periods of editing because it gets me to get really INto my novel again - it's great for my focus.

Happy editing, kids.


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I made some revisions on To Kiss a Dead Man... They're better than the original, but I don't think the story's all it could be yet. If you get a free minute, I was hoping you could maybe look it over and give me some more advice, especially on the revisions you suggested.

Thanks again for the advice.
| Posted on 2008-07-23 19:22:14 | by deadbeat_88 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for the advice on To Kiss A Dead Man. I wrote it a while back and I was really proud of it, but now that I'm a little older I'm trying to find ways to make it better. Your critisism is much appreciated, and I will deffinitly start making some revisions.

Thanks again.
| Posted on 2008-06-20 16:17:28 | by deadbeat_88 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for the nice compliment on Seasonal Lover's Dance - I lived in GA for about 3 years and never saw snow either but some wonderful lightning! I love weather in all of "IT's " glories in all places!

Happy Day!
love,peace,joy&smiles to share

tif
| Posted on 2007-05-30 18:47:40 | by Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
  
hello!

thanks for the comment and for making the poem a fave - it really is much appreciated! and yeah, i would have twisted those movie lines more but i thought quoting them pretty directly would be a sure way to avoid completely mangling them and ruining their charm.

thanks again!

byeee.
| Posted on 2007-05-25 14:03:02 | by Icarus - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thank you for you words, in both your cpmment and your poetry.
| Posted on 2007-05-25 12:47:51 | by chilz - [ Reply to This ] -



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