Name: Jennifer Avery
ASL: 30/F/Calhoun, GA
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16.71 Years 1.67 Quote:
"Much talk means much exhaustion. Better far it is to keep your thoughts." Lao Tzu
Miss Holiday Golightly by Icarus
Jack's Ghost by RodeoClown
The Dance of Beatnik Bill by RodeoClown
"On Love Poems" by Sir Jimeth
Through My Window by oixi
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I made some revisions on To Kiss a Dead Man... They're better than the original, but I don't think the story's all it could be yet. If you get a free minute, I was hoping you could maybe look it over and give me some more advice, especially on the revisions you suggested.
Thanks again for the advice.
|| Posted on 2008-07-23 19:22:14 | by deadbeat_88 - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thanks for the advice on To Kiss A Dead Man. I wrote it a while back and I was really proud of it, but now that I'm a little older I'm trying to find ways to make it better. Your critisism is much appreciated, and I will deffinitly start making some revisions.
|| Posted on 2008-06-20 16:17:28 | by deadbeat_88 - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thanks for the nice compliment on Seasonal Lover's Dance - I lived in GA for about 3 years and never saw snow either but some wonderful lightning! I love weather in all of "IT's " glories in all places!
love,peace,joy&smiles to share
|| Posted on 2007-05-30 18:47:40 | by Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -|
thanks for the comment and for making the poem a fave - it really is much appreciated! and yeah, i would have twisted those movie lines more but i thought quoting them pretty directly would be a sure way to avoid completely mangling them and ruining their charm.
|| Posted on 2007-05-25 14:03:02 | by Icarus - [ Reply to This ] -|
Thank you for you words, in both your cpmment and your poetry.
|| Posted on 2007-05-25 12:47:51 | by chilz - [ Reply to This ] -|