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    Journal: Love this song
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    Mood: *dances*
      
    I first heard it in a Transfomer video on youtube. you know the old Transformer cartoon? Yea well, relatively short song but I can't get enough of it.

    AFI - Prelude 12/21

    This is what I brought you this you can keep,
    This is what I brought you may forget me.
    I promised to depart just promise one thing,
    Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep.

    This is what I brought you this you can keep,
    This is what I brought you may forget me.
    I promise you my heart just promise to sing,
    Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep.

    Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep.

    This is what I thought,
    I thought you need me,
    This is what I thought so think me naive,
    I promise you a heart you promised to keep,
    Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep.

    Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep.

    Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep.


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    hi there

    sorry for not replying sooner, had do to some work and other stuff which kept me off my computer but i didnt do much over new years. with family. lots of them. lol

    have a nice day
    ~james
    | Posted on 2007-01-01 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hi there,

    thank you for your continued comments on my work (though my ratio would say otherwise if it could talk, which it can't, and it doesn't really matter to me anymore) and its good to know they're still sparking thought trains and comments after all this time, In Your Town was written over a year ago i think, i may have only been 16! (no offense to you 16 years old of course, its just that English in higher education makes you realise how genius some writes are, and strangely, those writes aren't yours)

    but anyway thanks, again, you up to much at new years?
    ~james
    | Posted on 2006-12-30 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    wow jess your still on this thing...i didn't even know whether you still wrote poems or not...hey did you hear also that me and lissy are going out? but yea...thanks for commenting at least i see that you still talk to me even though we hardly do anymore lol
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by Draco - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hi there,

    just to say thanks for your comments on my writings (i dont get many anymore) so it was nice to read what someone else thought

    passenger i guess is my first draft of it, cos i kinda had the chords written and it was just filling the gaps, i played with several ideas and eventually came up with the chorus and the verse were just tagged on quite quickly, so they're a bit wierd and nonsensial (and i think they are) its because i rushed them, so apologies for that, but i felt as if i owed you an explanation seeing as you pointed it out

    a nice long message for you to read now, lol

    have a nice day and i hope you had a good christmas!
    ~james
    | Posted on 2006-12-29 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you Jessica for your thoughtful response to the song, "Do I Knoe You?" There are many things we do not consider where God is concerned. I appreciate your comments.
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by The Gadfly - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    the whole idea was to make it sound so stupid and dumb... kind of like the venting of a loser to justify being lonely.

    Thanks for the comments, I appreciate that a lot, even though I mentioned I dont care for what you think...

    by the way, I dont hate santa, I am just as fascinated as any kid will be about him (I am not a kid), I have not come across blond girls all my life, the place from where I am from, you cannot find blond girls.
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by rawpot - [ Reply to This ] -



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