Your comments made me smile. I think if i had a more diverse vocabulary my poems would be different, but in this world where you can't have everything- in keeping with my kiwiness- if you don't have a particular something you go out (in the back shed) and make it.
Hi there... in regards to alight i think that if you left off the last line it would still feel like a dance. I have to admit upon first reading it it coulda been a dance of another kind. But the twirl brought me back. (Smile)
As well, thanks for your thoughts on mine. I watched this weaver for better than a week on my friends deck. She had markings on her back that looked like two eyes. I was happy to be an observer. And happy that she didnt seem to mind me observing.
Appreciate the stop by. And zombies used to scare the bejeebies outta me. That was until the walking dead of course.