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    Thanks for the time Jane and your specific insights, it's always good to get feedback from another mind. I find my work a bit perplexing these days too (from a presentation point of view). bad dream/space travel audio book is how i might describe it. I watched this movie called 'Passengers' where a guy is woken up from suspended animation 30 yrs into a 120 yr journey and so he's basically going to be the only person awake for the rest of his life and it seems like that's how the poetry comes to me these days - widely spaced and imperfectly gotten at. Eventually, i suppose, i will get to where i'm going. :)
    | Posted on 2017-02-21 04:04:01 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Right, so the people stated live life in a right and certain way>>>>>>>
    this is exemplified by the ant. The problem, as i see it, is that Christmas is just one day and personally i'd remove it (xmas) from the poem
    otherwise what do DC et al (with the exception of JC) have to do with Christmas? They don't fit in the poem in an xmas context. Xmas might be the catalyst or brief moment which allows for the insight/inspiration but otherwise it's pretty much irrelevant.

    I was watching 'the office' one time and michael is in a rental 'trusting technology' and the gps tells him to take a right turn immediately, he does so and drives in a lake.
    To me, i can figure out where the poem goes, i'm not dense or mean spirited enough...

    but, strictly speaking, i can't follow your directions to get there.
    | Posted on 2017-02-20 07:26:26 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I had more of a scarey/creepy thing in mind with the picture but I was too lazy to find one to be quite frank. But you're both right, it's a bad picture haha. Thanks for the drive by.
    | Posted on 2017-02-16 22:42:44 | by Outlaw - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Woot! I see you have mastered the youtube post.
    Great couple of submissions from you. from anyone. period.
    :)

    | Posted on 2017-02-15 16:58:37 | by Daniel Barlow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks, Jane. I've been away a long time due mostly to health issues. Haven't felt like putting anything much to words.
    - Jim
    | Posted on 2017-02-15 04:57:57 | by my shadow - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for reading and commenting on His Hands. I was indeed blessed...

    Jane
    | Posted on 2016-06-20 12:26:50 | by Janesaddiction - [ Reply to This ] -



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