--Elite Writer Alias: Jaymi6 Name: Me Me ASL: 26/f/Canada Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 4215 Life Story: Ahhh?? [ Ignore User ]
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thank you for your kind comment on "the stillborn" i'm glad you liked it. the child was actually just a metaphor for the smoke, i tried to explain that in the description but obviously there are some shortcomings in my poem if no one got that...it was a poem about someone close to me smoking, and me not liking it, at its most basic. but the beauty of poetry is that it can be interpretated in so many ways, anyways. thanks again for your comment, your thought were much appreciated! e.