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    Journal: rawr
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Stop the world today, I'd like to get off.


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     The Broken Samaritan
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     On a mirror, In a store
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     Shake Myself Loose
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     Last February
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     I feel more like a Skeleton When...
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     Skeletons
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     Watchin' You (BRAND NEW SONG)
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     Time Gone Gone Gone
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     new song
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     When My Feet Hit the Ground
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     The Nightly Lovers
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     smoky glass
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     Leave Me
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     His Lips
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     Lipgloss...
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     Glitter in my hair
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     Be Something New
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     A Part of You
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     Dear Diary
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    hey send me a message when you sign back into the eliteskills community, there is a bunch of wanna bes stealing other peoples writings and trying to get there work published. FACT. There after your poem entitled "Rocks Through The Window" ... It reminds me of a song my brother and I sang, called pushit... well your poem, not the dumb shitters stealing peoples hard work. <3. O:-) -me


    the its name whos stealing your words, is poppi


    brb I'm gonna leave a long message of hate on this its page because its fucking insulting. Love you.
    | Posted on 2013-07-28 17:00:51 | by siroez - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Come back so that I might comment on one of the only good pieces I've read tonight! Kthx.
    | Posted on 2012-06-06 01:40:16 | by blueorchids - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I did a fave and run! I'll be back tomorrow with thoughts and stuff, but it's getting late here and I have a 5 am start (blech).

    Aly
    | Posted on 2011-04-05 15:40:20 | by AlyRose - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I appreciate your understanding. Many sometimes lose sight that poetry does have to be shaped by the writer for clarity. That shaping can be original, of course, but it has to be a guiding force to bring your story, or point, across. And it does take practice, and depending on your subject, it can be very difficult to make certain ideas coherent to readers while maintaining some poetic integrity. Though I think you have a lot of talent, and I'll look forward to reading some more of your writing if time permits me to do so.
    | Posted on 2010-11-22 12:21:19 | by Dolor - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    A billboard kid is one that you can read naked...
    or, as they say in voodoo country, "a body that's written on"...
    | Posted on 2010-04-26 05:29:42 | by Runes - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    No worries (although it does make things simpler).
    | Posted on 2010-02-05 17:24:05 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -



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