--Elite Writer Alias: Jazzy Name: Jazzy !!!! ASL: 16/f/USA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 3 Life Story: I came, wrote [ Ignore User ]
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Thank you Jazzy for the look, your time and your comment. You could easily sense lonliness in the cool of morning before dawn, but I was not lonely myself at that time. Sometimes the dawn can break so magnificiently it is breathtaking, as it was on that morning. I am so glad you liked the poem. Ted.
I agree with your comment on "The threatening Game". I'm actually going to rewrite it and see where i'm going to go with the next one. Now that i have the draft in, i can actually find a better way of putting it.
Will tell you all about if you're interested in seeing that came out of it.
Thanks for your comment on Hypnosis. I did not mean it to be abstract really, I just get annoyed by what is on tv and everywhere around, it is like everyone wants to look and act the same, especially the same as non fit role models.
I am glad you enjoyed though :)
As for your poem, I tend to go against the stream and tackle things that are left alone.
I hope that you got over this experience or are on your way to get over it, most of all remember that not all people are the same. Hold no grudge for it will only destroy you, but just grieve the time you need to and move on.
I think this is the message your poem conveys, just follow your own words.
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