--Elite Writer Alias: Jazzy Name: Jazzy !!!! ASL: 14/f/USA Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 17 Life Story: I came, wrote [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks for your comment on Hypnosis. I did not mean it to be abstract really, I just get annoyed by what is on tv and everywhere around, it is like everyone wants to look and act the same, especially the same as non fit role models.
I am glad you enjoyed though :)
As for your poem, I tend to go against the stream and tackle things that are left alone.
I hope that you got over this experience or are on your way to get over it, most of all remember that not all people are the same. Hold no grudge for it will only destroy you, but just grieve the time you need to and move on.
I think this is the message your poem conveys, just follow your own words.
Hey Jazzy, I just wanted to let you know, I got so many comments on 'moon' along with yours, I actually took your advice and changed it some....maybe you could check by sometime and check it out.
Yes! Thanks for commenting on "Moon..." *sigh* it needs work. I think I was somewhat scarred at first, and then accepted the fact that it really could use improvement, so thanks for deflating me. :)
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