Thank you for your comment. Hmm it seems it didn't have the message I intended to have very interesting. When I wrote it I did not even see the anger in it at all....I am fairly happy and I know many wonderful people but thank you for your interperatation and it wasn't just you who thought this which means I may have to relook it and edit a bit.
Thank you for commenting! I really enjoy the feedback! I was unsure about it because the form calls for a little redundancy. But Thank you agian for lettign me know both the form and meaning worked out okay!
The form I did not choose consciously. (if it is one) I woke up with a lingering dream, it was flooded with specific words and images and I wrote it down that day and modifyed it slightly to try to capture the feeling. Thank you for commenting!