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    Hi again. Yes, it's supposed to be a 'conversation' of sorts - the vampire reading someone's mind and answering the thoughts he reads. Thanks for the feedback!
    | Posted on 2008-02-20 00:52:19 | by Maverique - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment. Hmm it seems it didn't have the message I intended to have very interesting. When I wrote it I did not even see the anger in it at all....I am fairly happy and I know many wonderful people but thank you for your interperatation and it wasn't just you who thought this which means I may have to relook it and edit a bit.
    | Posted on 2008-02-19 19:55:23 | by MaxHam - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Thanks for your kinda comment. Have a great day ahead!
    | Posted on 2008-02-18 00:55:50 | by Maverique - [ Reply to This ] -
      

    Thank you for commenting! I really enjoy the feedback! I was unsure about it because the form calls for a little redundancy. But Thank you agian for lettign me know both the form and meaning worked out okay!
    | Posted on 2008-02-17 07:01:30 | by isis_lenore - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    The form I did not choose consciously. (if it is one) I woke up with a lingering dream, it was flooded with specific words and images and I wrote it down that day and modifyed it slightly to try to capture the feeling. Thank you for commenting!
    | Posted on 2008-02-16 09:03:32 | by isis_lenore - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Jerilynn, thank you for your comments on "A Highlands Love Song"! Have a great weekend!
    | Posted on 2008-02-15 17:36:58 | by Ron Cole - [ Reply to This ] -



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