--Elite Writer Alias: JimweiZERO Name: James ASL: 19/M/UK Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 90 Life Story: Unfinished [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 51 Forum Posts: 8 Shoutbox Posts: 5 RP Posts: 4 Signup Date: 1641 D 4.5 Years 0.45 Decades 54.7 Months 234.43 Weeks 1.64100e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: "All of man's problems stem from his not knowing how to sit still."- Blaise Pascal
Thanks for commenting on my piece. I can understand what you mean by druggies and whores but I have to disagree. I think everyone can be part of that negative and therefore should be included. Somehow I think even those still hope for something better or appreciate butterflies. I'll have to think about that before I decide to take it out.
I put the poem in stanzas if you'd ever like to read it again. I believe it would be more coherent.
thanks again
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