Thanks a lot for your comment. The only thing is that he won't read that because he doesn't even know he's helping me through all of this. It's really kind of poetic. I just look at him and hear him laugh, and it makes me feel better. That's the most beautiful thing about it. :D
for some reason, i couldn't comment on "burning pasion..." so i will do it here! i loved it! you are a really great lyricist because i could picture this vivdly in my head.(only the shins were singing it) the only thing i would change is the "now spoken" part at the end, not the whole line, i'd just take that off. it was really a great song, i'd love to here it sung!
What I mean is "I don't get it!" As I say, probably my loss, but beautiful as the words are they are, to me, incomprehensible. Has someone died? Have you died? Have you got a Guardian Angel? and so on. This is not critical of what YOU have done it is just that I am at a loss and, in the end, believe that if a work of art has to be explained it lacks something. Warm regards