done, the spacing has now been adjusted for ease of reading.
Thanks for your comment/s.
I guess the lack of commenting may be tracked down to two main reasons... many readers are just that - readers, they can't be fussed about feedback; and secondly, marketing/packaging - many peeps aren't aware of or couldn't be bothered to click on a tab for poetry. I was thinking about this yesterday, how with the wonders of www still with about 6B people on the planet, you'd think that at least half of us online poets would be read many times over Shakespeare or any of that mob in their day. But I will leave that to expert conjecture. Thanks again for your interaction, it is much valued and you are greatly appreciated. Cheers.