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JussyName: Justin Cloud ASL: 21 ...guy....waterworld Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 4879 Life Story: wanderer [ Ignore User ] Favorites: 2 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 6331 D 17.35 Years 1.73 Quote: I see through the darkness, my way back home |
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Hi Jussy:
Wow! You left me dumbfounded with the comment left for The "Procrastinating" Thinker. I am utterly speechless...I loved it! It is a beautiful to think and ponder, but considering the position the sculpture is in...he was created to ponder forever. Take care, Saby |
| Posted on 2010-03-11 23:49:56 | by CaramelCandy - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Is your quote from The Path? It reminds me of that song.
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| Posted on 2007-10-24 23:09:56 | by Razor2TheRosary - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Yes I am a Christian. And yes, I was implying that I have walked with him before in heaven. We've all been to heaven. We were there before and some are going back. Doesn't the bible say so? Well, anyway, thank you for your critique.
-Fiver |
| Posted on 2006-10-23 00:00:00 | by fiver - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Jussy,
Thanks for commenting on my poem, "Invincible Not." And, hard as it is to believe, I enjoyed hearing a dissenting view of my poem. I think sometimes everyone is just a little too afraid to add some constructive criticism to a comment. I agree with you, I thought it could be better, and it wasn't a poem I really put my heart into anyways. I tend to write more nostalgic or happy poems than dark. This one was just really forced for me, do you have any ideas how I could improve it? Take care. ~Jen~ PS Which of my other poems have you read? |
| Posted on 2006-10-20 00:00:00 | by Jengrr - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Yes I have. Quite a bit actually... have you? I was merely emulating both poet's enjambment and rhymes...
Answer your question? |
| Posted on 2006-10-19 00:00:00 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] - |