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    He turned and made his way back down the pathway. Here was a crack, there a rock missing, dead patches of grass all along the pathway. Neglected. The house looked even worse. The porch looked like an accident that was waiting to happen. The steps creaked more than it should, the poles were loose… More than once Lee-Anne stumbled over an exposed nail. Once she almost fell all the way down the stairs. Luckily she got hold of the railing that, thank God, did not topple down the stairs with her. Michael opened the swing door, if you could still call it that; it was hanging by one hinge only. He closed the front door with a bit of effort. The untreated wooden door got wet at the bottom when there was a flood in the neighbourhood. The door was now a bit too big for the frame. No time to get a new one. Mostly no desire.
    Inside, the house was alive and inviting.



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    have a little look for someone by the name of discombobulated... i think you will find him to be someone you know *wink wink*

    well im glad to have you back while ive got you who knows when they'll reblock you. i never did get that whole blocking from poetry thing though... yeah...

    nice to see you
    | Posted on 2008-08-20 09:56:15 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    you signed in!!!?
    yay!
    | Posted on 2008-08-19 11:48:29 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

    haha.

    *wink*
    | Posted on 2008-02-03 04:56:36 | by silent strings - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Happy New Years to you too... I just spent all of today pretty much sleeping in lol. Ended up swimming after midnight with this buxom blonde... New Years kisses under the moonlight... totally random lol.
    | Posted on 2008-01-01 05:17:30 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Ah yep, got that totally wrong lol.

    And yeah, Jesus sandals... otherwise called thongs in Aussie, I think. But f.uck those Aussies lol.

    I split up with my gf about a month ago... after 6 months. It's a perfect time to either be together for ages or to split up right there and then. We took the latter option lol... we're still in contact though, which is nice. But then, I've only ever had one gf where it went bad...

    I'm off to a barbecue soon... I can smell those steaks already lol.
    | Posted on 2007-12-28 14:42:16 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment, and no, it wasn't sh.itty lol...

    I have no idea what I'm going to read out... probably mostly published stuff... stuff that's gone down well at spoken word sessions... yeah. It's gonna be fun as hell.

    And, as for poetry... that timeless essence is what I strive for a lot... something that can be read now or three hundred years from now and still make sense.
    | Posted on 2007-12-27 02:56:32 | by alteredlife - [ Reply to This ] -



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