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    Name: Karen S.
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    A Palette for You by ladydeathstrike
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Eyes meeting across from each other
    One simple glance affixed with a thousand meanings
    Nurturing an idea rooted on hopes and dreams
    Insidious since its inception
    Nothing feeds it externally
    Yet it grows


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    Featured: Walking Heavy

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    am I the wizard? cause I can be... if you want me to be.... :-)
    | Posted on 2012-12-10 21:49:37 | by ladydeathstrike - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks karina for your very kind comments about my poem!

    Annie
    | Posted on 2012-11-10 17:28:08 | by annie0888 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, thanks for the appreciation of the comment. I hope to hear from the author maybe, if not, that's okay, but I'm glad someone liked it.

    I deliberately nicked up the last haiku, for appropriate reasons. :)

    Edit: Ha, nevermind, she did reply, it was just below your comment on my page lol.
    | Posted on 2012-11-10 13:44:02 | by Dolor - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for letting me know you liked the poem about an imaginary friend. It is difficult to reveal personal secrets (if that is one, and not just another story!) but when we do, we find that others have much the same sorts of private experiences!
    | Posted on 2012-07-29 21:49:38 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I'm glad you got to read "A Lost Paradise". Sorry if I confused you. I did use an indirect metaphor for two things. I compared the tale of explorers concquering unexplored lands to turn them into cosmopolitan cities with a man attempting to change a woman into something she is not. The last stanza was more of a realization that due to him changing her, she is no longer what he fell in love with.

    I hope that answers some of your question and if it's still not clear, I'm going to change the structure, hoping that it's a bit clearer.

    Thanks for your input. I always appreciate your thoughts.

    Irina
    | Posted on 2012-07-20 08:22:44 | by charmedidentity - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hi Karen...

    and thanks for the comments on "Demolition 10"---

    and you just figure out what the poem means to you the reader, don't worry about me...

    again i appreciate the read, and re-reads.
    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-07-11 21:56:34 | by jacoberin - [ Reply to This ] -



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