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Alias: KeeperOfLight
Name: Hikaru Yue
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In the Darkness

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Featured: In the Darkness

Tear N tare
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::Love : Class : Lyrics :

Preperscribed
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Script- Freak and the Lady
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::Love : Class : Prose :

Why do I love?
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::Love : Class : Poetry :

Masters Notes Book III
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Adrift
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The Affair of Silent Love
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In the Darkness version 2
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Looking Over the World for You
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Symphonies of the Wind
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One Meets Another
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Roots
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I am Lost
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Flaws
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Things to be said
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It is Just Clockwork
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Chapter 2: Racing Time
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Chapter1: In the Darkness
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Self Condemnation
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i appreciate the advice on my poem. take care.

</3 lisa

| Posted on 2009-02-17 06:06:56 | by 777sacrites777 - [ Reply to This ] -

thanks for your comment....

| Posted on 2008-12-25 19:00:30 | by Katrinagolden - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you very much! It means alot to hear that!

| Posted on 2008-12-19 21:29:04 | by Aangskate - [ Reply to This ] -

Well thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed what I have written, but please critique on a piece. That would be even more greatly appreciated! Any words of advice would be greatly beneficially :).

| Posted on 2008-12-19 04:33:55 | by MuckyMuckpoop - [ Reply to This ] -

Well on reading it again it wasnt as bad it was just that your decription made me think it was supposed to be a mystery until the end.

Also this time I noticed the line: "Her head is large, but not small."
I think there's something missing??

And your missing an 's' it should be "the days following this" not "the day" but obviously that's minor.

So I think you should leave it apart from those two small mistakes.

| Posted on 2008-11-22 19:02:43 | by ChildInTime - [ Reply to This ] -

Japanese Language and writing can be broken down into two forms, Hiragina the native form, and Katakana which is the English translated into Japanese language. Like instead of using the native words for Ice Cream they developed characters to spell out I S(u) Ka Ri M(u)
(u)= Silent U,

| Posted on 2008-06-27 01:48:32 | by caveman - [ Reply to This ] -

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