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    Journal: i dont know
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    what i've been told


    ...Created 2015-07-03 23:41:00     [ View Past Journals ]

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    Featured: Here Gravity is Just a Theory

     to Be like
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    ::Serious : Class : Random Thoughts :
     Vortex: The Imagination That Is
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Contact
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    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     Dying
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    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     Sensation
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Quickwater (2)
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    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Grief of the Woman
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Dear Muse
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Past Wails
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     Why Are You "Dying"
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     Today I danced
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     I Can No Longer Stop
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Outside and Inside
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     Cumbered Change
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     You're a Day Dream
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     Ebb Into the Sky
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     Quickwater
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     Entertain Me
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    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     Reverb
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     Vortex - The Imagination That Is!
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    thank you ! for liking my poem "exposure" .. i appreciate your words very much. :)
    | Posted on 2011-12-24 02:35:32 | by Iram - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    i appreciate the advice on my poem. take care.

    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2009-02-17 06:06:56 | by 777sacrites777 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for your comment....
    | Posted on 2008-12-25 19:00:30 | by Katrinagolden - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you very much! It means alot to hear that!
    | Posted on 2008-12-19 21:29:04 | by Aangskate - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed what I have written, but please critique on a piece. That would be even more greatly appreciated! Any words of advice would be greatly beneficially :).
    | Posted on 2008-12-19 04:33:55 | by MuckyMuckpoop - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well on reading it again it wasnt as bad it was just that your decription made me think it was supposed to be a mystery until the end.

    Also this time I noticed the line: "Her head is large, but not small."
    I think there's something missing??

    And your missing an 's' it should be "the days following this" not "the day" but obviously that's minor.

    So I think you should leave it apart from those two small mistakes.
    | Posted on 2008-11-22 19:02:43 | by ChildInTime - [ Reply to This ] -



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