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    Journal: i dont know
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    what i've been told


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    Well on reading it again it wasnt as bad it was just that your decription made me think it was supposed to be a mystery until the end.

    Also this time I noticed the line: "Her head is large, but not small."
    I think there's something missing??

    And your missing an 's' it should be "the days following this" not "the day" but obviously that's minor.

    So I think you should leave it apart from those two small mistakes.
    | Posted on 2008-11-22 19:02:43 | by ChildInTime - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Japanese Language and writing can be broken down into two forms, Hiragina the native form, and Katakana which is the English translated into Japanese language. Like instead of using the native words for Ice Cream they developed characters to spell out I S(u) Ka Ri M(u)
    (u)= Silent U,
    | Posted on 2008-06-27 01:48:32 | by caveman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the compliment, most appreciated. As a writer my task is not to just put pretty words on paper but to evoke an emotional response from my readers.
    | Posted on 2008-06-03 20:11:37 | by caveman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanx for commenting on "feild of stone"

    -Koolness
    | Posted on 2008-05-20 16:49:33 | by koolness - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, go ahead, comment, praise, I don't care, I need fuel for my ego. xD
    So yeah, glad you like it.
    (That about made my day. :D)
    | Posted on 2008-05-19 12:26:58 | by Silver45 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Yeah, it is weird, I agree, but I couldn't think of any other way to do it. And thank you, I guess I'm okay with dialogue, but I'm [censored] with description. xP I'm working on that.
    So, thanks.
    | Posted on 2008-05-17 14:14:33 | by Silver45 - [ Reply to This ] -



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