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    Journal: Rambling Dream
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    Mood: Thinking...
      
    Each light between sunrise
    And sunset
    Is worth dying for at least once

    Each light between sunset
    And sunrise
    Is worth a piece of my dream



    "Serrated Dreams"

    Memories that still vividly
    Cut into my head
    Serrated with emotion
    Queue a headache

    Painkillers dull
    Colour itself
    So we can't touch them
    Dastardly dream killers

    To remembrance
    My hopes are brought
    Much better
    Than vengeance sought

    The night comes
    Contrasting
    Conflicting
    The night goes

    The day comes
    You're alive again
    But night comes so soon
    The day goes

    Cry your tears
    But forget your fears
    Till the sun vanishes again
    Even then, I'll be here, to hold you through the night.


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    Featured: Beauty. In the Eye of the Beholder

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     I know you take me seriously
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     For We Are Man
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     Out of Tune
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     Beached Confessions
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     Hope Needs a Setting
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     Trying to Communicate
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     Naturally We're Falling Apart
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     Illogical Common Sense
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     The little old man sitting by the sea
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     No Never
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     You act like it's okay to cry
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     Missing Monday
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     Did You Have Enough Today?
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     Stitches
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     the reality is, i'm human
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     Dead Man Walking
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     Featured workBeauty. In the Eye of the Beholder
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     The Clouds in the Sky
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     Unfinished
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    Wish there was email notification - I would have come back sooner to check on your "trying to communicate" edit you wrote on my wall about. come back so i can comment, horrendously late!
    | Posted on 2014-05-24 03:02:07 | by blueorchids - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Appreciate the reading and the critique. I do revisit everything I write, because, after all, I view every piece of writing as a draft, a work in progress. So when I revisit this one, I will take your words into consideration.

    Thanks again for the comments...
    | Posted on 2011-07-30 15:23:03 | by rubie - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey would you mind looking at my song "break away" and commenting what you think?
    | Posted on 2011-05-05 23:25:07 | by NaomiofHearts - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hmm... Are you still around this site??
    | Posted on 2010-10-27 04:38:53 | by stefhy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your comment on "If your soul was a pitcher"
    You see, it wasn't really a poem. It was some random thoughts I wrote down thus I put it under the category of random thoughts.
    I appreciate your honest opinion, though.

    S.S.
    | Posted on 2009-05-08 08:06:10 | by coloredstone - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey
    i saw you on the sign in page
    hows things going and what are you up to these days?
    hope youre well
    | Posted on 2009-05-08 05:04:10 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -



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