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    I will come again, and be more critical! I haven't read all of your poems yet. I can't do it today, because I have very little time with the computer; so I'm always too slow to do everything.
    | Posted on 2008-04-15 20:41:13 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on 'What to know' !

    All my sonnets are about evolution, from the beginning of the Universe to the emergence of the divine spirit. This poem is about a non-supernatural version of the religious myth: to understand it, perhaps you need basic studies in 'comparative religion' and in the concepts of emergence and collectivity. I mean that it is not a poem which should be addressed to everybody! Instead, it is a personal expression of my own, which I have not made into a truly public piece of art. Most of my sonnets are easy to understand, I think; but if you can't follow this one, that is definitely my fault and I cannot apologise because ... some better poems will soon come out of this bad poem!
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 22:08:27 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the critique on Down. You're right, it does sound strange now that I look at it from another's perspective. However, it took me a few minutes to right, thus, I have little ambition to put too much effort into editing it. Thank you though.
    ~xoxo~
    Sweets!
    | Posted on 2008-04-09 18:03:16 | by SweetAndOhSoME - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hallo dear how are you? I am so thankful for your comment on my poem!

    I will send you a PM to tell you more

    with love

    shabnam
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 03:12:50 | by shabnam - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hallo dear how are you? How is life? Hope to have you fine and smiling with your family? Thanks a lot for your lovely comments on my poem.

    Take care

    bye

    Sanam
    | Posted on 2007-11-21 13:15:33 | by shabnam - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi! Thanks for the comments on my latest poem. Truly appreciated!

    Chrystine
    | Posted on 2007-08-18 12:12:36 | by beatthedrum - [ Reply to This ] -



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