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    you stood
    upon the edge of my moat
    and gently pled,
    ‘please lower your bridge’

    there was no reply

    so you
    took pebbles from the ground
    and tossed them into
    the murky water between us

    ‘i love you’
    the first stone was dedicated.
    ‘im here for you’
    the next.

    ‘you are beautiful’

    following

    ‘you are cherished’

    little ripples
    splashing with no effect.

    love is not the antidote to
    depression
    my walls remained tall,
    threatening

    to cave inward upon me

    but you persisted

    ‘i love you’ another stone was named
    ‘everything is okay’ soon after


    and then i realized
    if i did not let you in,
    you would build your own bridge

    one piece at a time.




    ‘what are you thinking about?’
    you asked quietly.

    ‘poetry.’


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    Thank you for you comment on my piece 'The Silver'

    I try to capture in all of my work a dark overtone, even in the more warming pieces I write. The world we live in is rife with conflict and darkened thoughts and I try to merely reflect our times in my work. I promise you I try to produce quality work. Thank you-

    -Dustin
    | Posted on 2013-08-08 15:12:44 | by HisNameIsNoMore - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I don't get on so often anymore, and I post even less... but a few months back you left some comments on some of my pieces and I wanted to thank you for the feedback...
    | Posted on 2013-07-06 13:13:35 | by nicodemous - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Oh, why hello there, ma'am!

    | Posted on 2013-06-05 17:53:59 | by Kael Fenshir - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Aren't you being evaporate?
    | Posted on 2013-04-05 02:54:20 | by Urisen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Ha, thanks for the ego boost. So many compliments. Thanks for your words, that piece was going to be far longer when I first started on it but I kept trimming it down. I gotta tell you (not to sound like a complete perv), webcams are fascinating in how revealing some people can be to complete strangers...

    anyway. Thanks again, glad you liked the piece
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    Hello, hope you had a good day.
    Thank you for the comment.
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