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    Alias: L.L.COLLINS
    Name: LATRAVIOUS COLLINS
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Journal: usual
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    Mood: confused
    It is offen a complaint of my readers that my writing has an uneven or difficult flow to it, therefore I assume this must be true. My problem with this is I am not sure how to correct it. When I read through my own work, the lines seem almost pefectly even but I assume that is because I wrote it and I know the flow I intended but How do I leave readers with the same?




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    hey it shows you were on...um...i lost your email can you send me something so I have it again? Please...I'm sorry...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by redeemer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    okay well...i love ya...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by redeemer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on my poem Her Twisted Heart, glad you enjoyed reading it if you would like to chat with me just send me a pm we can talk about the copyright ok.
    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by LadyMustang - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    oh i know, and i can take criticism but when people are way out of line like she was, well you just have to set them straight!!! She really had no idea what she was talking about, she's just an illeterate BITCH!!!...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by redeemer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    and don't worry i gave that [censored] a piece of my mind, because she has no idea what the hell she is talking about, shes 14 what the hell does she know about anything. nothing, she doesn't seems like a stuck up BITCH!...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by redeemer - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    what a [censored]...apparently this [censored] doesn't no anything and is completely illiterate. because you are the best writer i have ever met, and believe me ive read a lot of stuff, so [censored] her...kisses~Ashley~
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by redeemer - [ Reply to This ] -



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