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L.L.COLLINS

Name: LATRAVIOUS COLLINS
ASL: 25-ORLANDO, FL
Bio: [ Quick Bio ]
Website:[ Education ]
Days Away: 3312
Life Story: pen, papaer, blood
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Favorites: 11
Forum Posts: 0
Shoutbox Posts: 1
RP Posts: 0
Signup Date: 6410 D
17.56 Years 1.76 Quote:
INFAMY IS THE TRUE ROAD TO FAME

Recent Favorites:

Nightmares by FlickerofHope

Sincerely Your Diary by Drain_my_Blood

The eve of love's death by chilz

The butterfly on the moon by alittlebithippy

Never Forget You by Magnolia Steele
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Prison Keys
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Currently Stalking: lynxstarfire, uniquewoods69, liv2lovethepain, redeemer

Mood: The Usual

Journal: usual
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Mood: confused
It is offen a complaint of my readers that my writing has an uneven or difficult flow to it, therefore I assume this must be true. My problem with this is I am not sure how to correct it. When I read through my own work, the lines seem almost pefectly even but I assume that is because I wrote it and I know the flow I intended but How do I leave readers with the same?

...Created 2006-07-08 03:27:55 [ View Past Journals ]

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Featured: Prison Keys

WITHOUT YOU IS MY NAME
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

WITHOUT BREATHING IN
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WATCHING HER FALL
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::Serious : Class : Poetry :

LONELY SOULS
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::Passion : Class : Poetry :

KISSLESS
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::Misc : Class : Misc :

A THOUSAND MILES AWAY
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

CARRIED TO BED (revised)
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::Love : Class : Poetry :

CARRIED TO BED
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::Love : Class : Poetry :

SONGS FOR HER
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::Misc : Class : Poetry :

BARACK OBAMA
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A POEM CALLED DEATH
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::Death : Class : Poetry :

Who Art Thou In Heaven
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A WORLD INSANE (until things have changed)
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::Venting : Class : Poetry :

AT LAST
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::Love : Class : Poetry :

I GOTTA FLY AWAY (repost)
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

I GOTTA FLY AWAY
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::Trapped : Class : Poetry :

the truth
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::Depressed : Class : Poetry :

PLEASE (let me go)
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

PIECE OF MY LIFE
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SO HIGH
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Thank you for commenting on "call me" -Urisen.

| Posted on 2010-07-10 13:53:47 | by Urisen - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for your encouraging comment on The Empty Treehouse! It is true that I have had a really nice childhood. I'm sorry if your childhood doesn't have as many memories like the ones in the poem, but I'm glad you could still enjoy it.
-dancer

| Posted on 2010-07-05 14:22:57 | by dancer-of-words - [ Reply to This ] -

Super cute eh? Dont think Ive had that on a comment before. lol. Thanks!

| Posted on 2010-01-09 15:20:06 | by kre8ive1 - [ Reply to This ] -

Her name is Morgan. Morgana le Fay ring any bells? Just an association. Yup. Thanks for reading.

| Posted on 2010-01-01 18:33:00 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi
Just rembered I forgot to thank you for your comments on a piece I did abt two months bac. You are a very good writer with a sort of abstract feel to your work. Read a couple of your pieces and they were just perfection. Lookin forward to more from you.

Cheers

Willoyd

| Posted on 2009-01-25 12:36:21 | by Willoyd - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you for commenting on Desert Rose. Glad you enjoyed it.

:)

| Posted on 2008-12-07 00:52:51 | by TamarRoze - [ Reply to This ] -

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