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L.L.COLLINS


Name: LATRAVIOUS COLLINS
ASL: 25-ORLANDO, FL
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Website:[ Education ]
Days Away: 3117
Life Story: pen, papaer, blood
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Favorites: 11
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Signup Date: 6215 D
17.03 Years 1.7 Quote:
INFAMY IS THE TRUE ROAD TO FAME


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Nightmares by FlickerofHope
Sincerely Your Diary by Drain_my_Blood
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Currently Stalking: lynxstarfire, uniquewoods69, liv2lovethepain, redeemer

Mood: The Usual
  
Journal: usual
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Mood: confused
It is offen a complaint of my readers that my writing has an uneven or difficult flow to it, therefore I assume this must be true. My problem with this is I am not sure how to correct it. When I read through my own work, the lines seem almost pefectly even but I assume that is because I wrote it and I know the flow I intended but How do I leave readers with the same?




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Featured: Prison Keys

 WITHOUT YOU IS MY NAME
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :
 WITHOUT BREATHING IN
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::Love : Class : Poetry :
 WATCHING HER FALL
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::Serious : Class : Poetry :
 LONELY SOULS
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::Passion : Class : Poetry :
 KISSLESS
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::Misc : Class : Misc :
 A THOUSAND MILES AWAY
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :
 CARRIED TO BED (revised)
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::Love : Class : Poetry :
 CARRIED TO BED
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::Love : Class : Poetry :
 SONGS FOR HER
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::Misc : Class : Poetry :
 BARACK OBAMA
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::Serious : Class : Poetry :
 A POEM CALLED DEATH
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::Death : Class : Poetry :
 Who Art Thou In Heaven
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::Love : Class : Poetry :
 A WORLD INSANE (until things have changed)
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::Venting : Class : Poetry :
 AT LAST
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::Love : Class : Poetry :
 I GOTTA FLY AWAY (repost)
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :
 I GOTTA FLY AWAY
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::Trapped : Class : Poetry :
 the truth
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::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
 PLEASE (let me go)
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :
 PIECE OF MY LIFE
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :
 SO HIGH
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Thank you for commenting on "call me" -Urisen.
| Posted on 2010-07-10 13:53:47 | by Urisen - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thanks for your encouraging comment on The Empty Treehouse! It is true that I have had a really nice childhood. I'm sorry if your childhood doesn't have as many memories like the ones in the poem, but I'm glad you could still enjoy it.
-dancer
| Posted on 2010-07-05 14:22:57 | by dancer-of-words - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Super cute eh? Dont think Ive had that on a comment before. lol. Thanks!
| Posted on 2010-01-09 15:20:06 | by kre8ive1 - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Her name is Morgan. Morgana le Fay ring any bells? Just an association. Yup. Thanks for reading.
| Posted on 2010-01-01 18:33:00 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Hi
Just rembered I forgot to thank you for your comments on a piece I did abt two months bac. You are a very good writer with a sort of abstract feel to your work. Read a couple of your pieces and they were just perfection. Lookin forward to more from you.

Cheers

Willoyd
| Posted on 2009-01-25 12:36:21 | by Willoyd - [ Reply to This ] -
  
Thank you for commenting on Desert Rose. Glad you enjoyed it.

:)

| Posted on 2008-12-07 00:52:51 | by TamarRoze - [ Reply to This ] -



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