L.L.COLLINS

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Alias: L.L.COLLINS
Name: LATRAVIOUS COLLINS
ASL: 25-ORLANDO, FL
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Days Away: 28
Life Story: pen, papaer, blood
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Mood: confused
It is offen a complaint of my readers that my writing has an uneven or difficult flow to it, therefore I assume this must be true. My problem with this is I am not sure how to correct it. When I read through my own work, the lines seem almost pefectly even but I assume that is because I wrote it and I know the flow I intended but How do I leave readers with the same?

...Created 2006-07-08 03:27:55 [ View Past Journals ]
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Featured: Prison Keys

WATCHING HER FALL
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::Serious : Class : Poetry :

LONELY SOULS
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::Passion : Class : Poetry :

KISSLESS
:|| V: 68 | C: 1 ||:
::Misc : Class : Misc :

A THOUSAND MILES AWAY
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

CARRIED TO BED (revised)
:|| V: 68 | C: 3 ||:
::Love : Class : Poetry :

CARRIED TO BED
:|| V: 117 | C: 4 ||:
::Love : Class : Poetry :

SONGS FOR HER
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::Misc : Class : Poetry :

BARACK OBAMA
:|| V: 136 | C: 4 ||:
::Serious : Class : Poetry :

A POEM CALLED DEATH
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::Death : Class : Poetry :

Who Art Thou In Heaven
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::Love : Class : Poetry :

A WORLD INSANE (until things have changed)
:|| V: 172 | C: 3 ||:
::Venting : Class : Poetry :

AT LAST
:|| V: 169 | C: 2 ||:
::Love : Class : Poetry :

I GOTTA FLY AWAY (repost)
:|| V: 196 | C: 3 ||:
::Longing : Class : Poetry :

I GOTTA FLY AWAY
:|| V: 169 | C: 3 ||:
::Trapped : Class : Poetry :

the truth
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::Depressed : Class : Poetry :

PLEASE (let me go)
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

PIECE OF MY LIFE
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

SO HIGH
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

FIGHT BACK
:|| V: 185 | C: 2 ||:
::Venting : Class : Poetry :

THIS MUST BE PAIN
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Hi
Just rembered I forgot to thank you for your comments on a piece I did abt two months bac. You are a very good writer with a sort of abstract feel to your work. Read a couple of your pieces and they were just perfection. Lookin forward to more from you.

Cheers

Willoyd

| Posted on 2009-01-25 12:36:21 | by Willoyd - [ Reply to This ] -

Thank you for commenting on Desert Rose. Glad you enjoyed it.

:)

| Posted on 2008-12-07 00:52:51 | by TamarRoze - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi there,

Death was actually the first aspect to occur to me, it was only when I looked deeper did I realise it could be more subtle. Glad to have gotten it right, though.

It's my turn to thank you for the comment. Some day I hope you have kids and can see for yourself.

Take care,

- A.I.M

| Posted on 2008-11-20 11:03:22 | by AIM - [ Reply to This ] -

Hey, it's been a long time since I've seen you on my page. So how's it? You should check out some of my new stuff, and then I'll check out yours too. Kinda busy right now, so I gotta go. Look forward to hearing from ya!

| Posted on 2008-11-19 23:25:11 | by FlickerofHope - [ Reply to This ] -

while i find your stewie icon amusing everthing posted on your page in plain view is supposed to be pg. just thought I'd let ya know.

| Posted on 2008-11-17 14:56:07 | by shaman - [ Reply to This ] -

Ok I am somewhat sorry. I am willing to say my last comment on you page was rash. I raise the white flag. I thought I may be fun to razz ya for a while. But I a starting to remember why I don't get on myspace anymore. I will try to keep my eye out for you and give some comments in the not so distant. I realize that emotions are running high right now. I really do hope the best for my new leader. It would be foolish not to. I am not so much against him anyway. I don't like him, but I didn't vote McCain. I gave my vote to good old Chuck.

| Posted on 2008-11-08 17:29:44 | by nicodemous - [ Reply to This ] -

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