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    Name: LATRAVIOUS COLLINS
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    Mood: The Usual
      
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    Mood: confused
    It is offen a complaint of my readers that my writing has an uneven or difficult flow to it, therefore I assume this must be true. My problem with this is I am not sure how to correct it. When I read through my own work, the lines seem almost pefectly even but I assume that is because I wrote it and I know the flow I intended but How do I leave readers with the same?




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    Featured: Prison Keys

     WITHOUT YOU IS MY NAME
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    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     WITHOUT BREATHING IN
    :|| V: 382 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     WATCHING HER FALL
    :|| V: 457 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     LONELY SOULS
    :|| V: 408 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     KISSLESS
    :|| V: 564 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     A THOUSAND MILES AWAY
    :|| V: 596 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     CARRIED TO BED (revised)
    :|| V: 429 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     CARRIED TO BED
    :|| V: 519 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     SONGS FOR HER
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    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     BARACK OBAMA
    :|| V: 584 | C: 4 ||:
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     A POEM CALLED DEATH
    :|| V: 540 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Death : Class : Poetry :
     Who Art Thou In Heaven
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    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     A WORLD INSANE (until things have changed)
    :|| V: 688 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
     AT LAST
    :|| V: 553 | C: 2 ||:
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     I GOTTA FLY AWAY (repost)
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     I GOTTA FLY AWAY
    :|| V: 863 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Trapped : Class : Poetry :
     the truth
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    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     PLEASE (let me go)
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     PIECE OF MY LIFE
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     SO HIGH
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    Thank you for commenting on "call me" -Urisen.
    | Posted on 2010-07-10 13:53:47 | by Urisen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your encouraging comment on The Empty Treehouse! It is true that I have had a really nice childhood. I'm sorry if your childhood doesn't have as many memories like the ones in the poem, but I'm glad you could still enjoy it.
    -dancer
    | Posted on 2010-07-05 14:22:57 | by dancer-of-words - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Super cute eh? Dont think Ive had that on a comment before. lol. Thanks!
    | Posted on 2010-01-09 15:20:06 | by kre8ive1 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Her name is Morgan. Morgana le Fay ring any bells? Just an association. Yup. Thanks for reading.
    | Posted on 2010-01-01 18:33:00 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi
    Just rembered I forgot to thank you for your comments on a piece I did abt two months bac. You are a very good writer with a sort of abstract feel to your work. Read a couple of your pieces and they were just perfection. Lookin forward to more from you.

    Cheers

    Willoyd
    | Posted on 2009-01-25 12:36:21 | by Willoyd - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for commenting on Desert Rose. Glad you enjoyed it.

    :)

    | Posted on 2008-12-07 00:52:51 | by TamarRoze - [ Reply to This ] -



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