--Elite Writer Alias: L.L.COLLINS Name: LATRAVIOUS COLLINS ASL: 25-ORLANDO, FL Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 2113 Life Story: pen, papaer, blood [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 11 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 1 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 5211 D 14.28 Years 1.43 Decades 173.7 Months 744.43 Weeks 5.211000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman Quote: INFAMY IS THE TRUE ROAD TO FAME
It is offen a complaint of my readers that my writing has an uneven or difficult flow to it, therefore I assume this must be true. My problem with this is I am not sure how to correct it. When I read through my own work, the lines seem almost pefectly even but I assume that is because I wrote it and I know the flow I intended but How do I leave readers with the same?
Thanks for your encouraging comment on The Empty Treehouse! It is true that I have had a really nice childhood. I'm sorry if your childhood doesn't have as many memories like the ones in the poem, but I'm glad you could still enjoy it.
Just rembered I forgot to thank you for your comments on a piece I did abt two months bac. You are a very good writer with a sort of abstract feel to your work. Read a couple of your pieces and they were just perfection. Lookin forward to more from you.