--Elite Writer Alias: L.L.COLLINS Name: LATRAVIOUS COLLINS ASL: 23-ORLANDO, FL Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 2 Life Story: dying to write [ Ignore User ]
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Journal: usual
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Mood: confused
It is offen a complaint of my readers that my writing has an uneven or difficult flow to it, therefore I assume this must be true. My problem with this is I am not sure how to correct it. When I read through my own work, the lines seem almost pefectly even but I assume that is because I wrote it and I know the flow I intended but How do I leave readers with the same?
Thank you for the comment on my poem Her Twisted Heart, glad you enjoyed reading it if you would like to chat with me just send me a pm we can talk about the copyright ok.
oh i know, and i can take criticism but when people are way out of line like she was, well you just have to set them straight!!! She really had no idea what she was talking about, she's just an illeterate BITCH!!!...kisses~Ashley~
and don't worry i gave that [censored] a piece of my mind, because she has no idea what the hell she is talking about, shes 14 what the hell does she know about anything. nothing, she doesn't seems like a stuck up BITCH!...kisses~Ashley~
what a [censored]...apparently this [censored] doesn't no anything and is completely illiterate. because you are the best writer i have ever met, and believe me ive read a lot of stuff, so [censored] her...kisses~Ashley~