Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    --Elite Writer
    Alias: L.L.COLLINS
    Name: LATRAVIOUS COLLINS
    ASL: 25-ORLANDO, FL
    Bio: [ Quick Bio ]
    Website:[ Education ]
    Days Away: 1589
    Life Story: pen, papaer, blood
    [ Ignore User ]

    Favorites: 11
    Forum Posts: 0
    Shoutbox Posts: 1
    RP Posts: 0
    Signup Date: 4687 D
    12.84 Years 1.28 Decades
    156.23 Months 669.57 Weeks
    4.687000e+8 Heart Beats
    -There you go eggman
    Quote:
    INFAMY IS THE TRUE ROAD TO FAME

    nav
    nav

    Yahoo: biggirlbigworld2@yahoo
    [ Communicate asdf ]

    Recent Favorites:
    Nightmares by FlickerofHope
    Sincerely Your Diary by Drain_my_Blood
    The eve of love's death by chilz
    The butterfly on the moon by alittlebithippy
    Never Forget You by Magnolia Steele
    View all Faves

    Featured:
    Prison Keys


    Awards:
      Contributer: For users that are especially giving in feedback.

    [ + RSS ]
    [ + Google It ]
    [ + My Yahoo ]



    Currently Stalking: lynxstarfire, uniquewoods69, liv2lovethepain, redeemer

    Journal:
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: The Usual
      
    Journal: usual
    -------------------------------------------
    Mood: confused
    It is offen a complaint of my readers that my writing has an uneven or difficult flow to it, therefore I assume this must be true. My problem with this is I am not sure how to correct it. When I read through my own work, the lines seem almost pefectly even but I assume that is because I wrote it and I know the flow I intended but How do I leave readers with the same?




    ...Created 2006-07-08 03:27:55     [ View Past Journals ]

    [ View as Blog ]

    dotsLast 20 Submissionsdots

    Featured: Prison Keys

     WITHOUT YOU IS MY NAME
    :|| V: 408 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     WITHOUT BREATHING IN
    :|| V: 445 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     WATCHING HER FALL
    :|| V: 503 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     LONELY SOULS
    :|| V: 457 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Passion : Class : Poetry :
     KISSLESS
    :|| V: 693 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Misc :
     A THOUSAND MILES AWAY
    :|| V: 688 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     CARRIED TO BED (revised)
    :|| V: 465 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     CARRIED TO BED
    :|| V: 577 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     SONGS FOR HER
    :|| V: 632 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     BARACK OBAMA
    :|| V: 651 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     A POEM CALLED DEATH
    :|| V: 600 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Death : Class : Poetry :
     Who Art Thou In Heaven
    :|| V: 761 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     A WORLD INSANE (until things have changed)
    :|| V: 750 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Venting : Class : Poetry :
     AT LAST
    :|| V: 615 | C: 2 ||:
    ::Love : Class : Poetry :
     I GOTTA FLY AWAY (repost)
    :|| V: 985 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     I GOTTA FLY AWAY
    :|| V: 989 | C: 3 ||:
    ::Trapped : Class : Poetry :
     the truth
    :|| V: 793 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Depressed : Class : Poetry :
     PLEASE (let me go)
    :|| V: 840 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     PIECE OF MY LIFE
    :|| V: 704 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
     SO HIGH
    :|| V: 980 | C: 4 ||:
    ::Longing : Class : Poetry :
    List All...





    ||| Messages |||
      
    Thank you for commenting on "call me" -Urisen.
    | Posted on 2010-07-10 13:53:47 | by Urisen - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your encouraging comment on The Empty Treehouse! It is true that I have had a really nice childhood. I'm sorry if your childhood doesn't have as many memories like the ones in the poem, but I'm glad you could still enjoy it.
    -dancer
    | Posted on 2010-07-05 14:22:57 | by dancer-of-words - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Super cute eh? Dont think Ive had that on a comment before. lol. Thanks!
    | Posted on 2010-01-09 15:20:06 | by kre8ive1 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Her name is Morgan. Morgana le Fay ring any bells? Just an association. Yup. Thanks for reading.
    | Posted on 2010-01-01 18:33:00 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi
    Just rembered I forgot to thank you for your comments on a piece I did abt two months bac. You are a very good writer with a sort of abstract feel to your work. Read a couple of your pieces and they were just perfection. Lookin forward to more from you.

    Cheers

    Willoyd
    | Posted on 2009-01-25 12:36:21 | by Willoyd - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for commenting on Desert Rose. Glad you enjoyed it.

    :)

    | Posted on 2008-12-07 00:52:51 | by TamarRoze - [ Reply to This ] -



    Format Text?


    Forum id=#25368

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Faith In Line written by MyPeriodical
    When Crows Tick on Windows written by metallichick786
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    A Fire! A Knife! A Black Crow Calls! written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    The Search written by HisNameIsNoMore
    ME written by jjd
    On Loop written by Daniel Barlow
    Born of the Mouth written by MyPeriodical
    I'm here written by BloodtornAngel
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Sunt Mala Quae Libas written by MyPeriodical
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Stretto written by saartha
    To the Epilogue written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The Last to Walk the Earth written by HisNameIsNoMore
    By the bar written by expiring_touch
    Tides of Man written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Convergence written by HisNameIsNoMore
    All Time Low written by Janesaddiction
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Aftermath and Waltz written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    Blood to Plowshares written by HisNameIsNoMore

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry