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    GODS LOVE ... I come from an atheist family so I constructed an atheist philosophy. After abolishing supernatural beings, I found that divinity continued to exist and an aspiration to whatever the best practice of love would be, if we could both discover and do it, is the central idea of this whole unique and all-ruling spirit.

    I have found it quite impossible to explain this matter of fact or the perfectly reasonable thinking which perceives it to anybody at all and my sister-in-law thinks I'm crazy.

    Religion is nothing but trouble and I am so frustrated that everybody misunderstands it except me, that I am considering using model aeroplanes to blow up violent extremists or at least people who are standing near a violent extremist or somebody who might look a bit like a violent extremist. That is really because I love Democracy but the religious feelings do help a lot since I'm not normally violent myself despite my history of violent offences and xenophobic aggression.
    | Posted on 2013-08-06 02:50:51 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You make some spelling mistakes ... it is a pedestrian skill but maybe worth doing. And maybe not because the most interesting English to be read is from centuries before anybody gave a rat's behind about spelling! I have a little boy who can't spell and probably will never ba able to. Would you like to adopt him?
    It is my personal tragedy that I hardly ever get a speling wrong.
    | Posted on 2013-08-06 02:33:51 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    They shut off your comment boxes. Temporarily, you just have to show up I guess.

    I just read all your pieces here and I like them. Verse is a vehicle for your wit and so are various other forms of writing, probably all the forms known!

    The rhyming verse is kind of odd-sounding, as if it were a quiet joke about rhyming. It reminded me of an image from the Ringworld SF stories. Niven? Anyway, they have this character whose brain is in its four-legged body and it has two heads on long necks, which are just mouths. Instead of laughing, the two heads look at each other. It can also sing in harmony ... None of that is negative - I just got so much amusement out of your work on several levels. Maybe you will be a great poet too like I might be. Someday.
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    You said I ought to write my lines in couplets and quattrains. OK I will try it. You reckon that would make me a great poet. Hmmmmm.....
    | Posted on 2013-08-06 02:01:13 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -



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