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Journal: Dear People, -------------------------------------------Mood: Smokingpoetry    I'm sorry I can not help you with your writing. I don't know anything about anything, so I'm not really comfortable making suggestions about your stuff. Hoping for your kind consideration, Lacky. ...Created 2009-05-13 23:41:09     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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Thank you for your comment on my piece.

| Posted on 2009-05-30 15:12:30 | by wizardmaster - [ Reply to This ] -

maybe I over-simplified but yknow, talking about you own poem is always like that lol

| Posted on 2009-05-15 09:42:14 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -

Uh...the Adam one is very obscure but its kind of more the earth giving birth to a man. Im not gonna try explain it cos you can take whatever yknow? I guess it could be the earth giving birth to itself in a way. Heart is much more simple, if you ever wanna read it again just do it from this perspective: If I were to call the poem shop it would be something like: Shop There are people walking through me every day I look at them through sliding doors, they pack me full of food etc etc yknow? Heart is kinda the same idea. Thank you so much for the comments, Im glad someone took an interest. -Craig

| Posted on 2009-05-15 07:35:29 | by Raphael - [ Reply to This ] -

lol, no prob sis. I get excited when I read good ish, lol. But anyway, you should really try spoken word. I'm a complete wuss, but I have confidence in my poetry and that its worth hearing so...I spit. Trust, your stuff is worth hearing. But I understand that there may not be any venues around your way. As for my poem "THE SALUTE". It's not finished as you guessed, still gotta wrap my head around the thoughts. But I'm glad you enjoyed reading it...I guess lol. SPIT FROM YOUR SPINE red

| Posted on 2009-05-14 07:34:09 | by red_summer - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks a lot for your comment and yep you were right you got it in one haha! Phil

| Posted on 2009-05-14 07:24:08 | by Dead Bell - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the words there Marie. I appreciate that. Yea I am going through a rough patch in life. Lost my girlfriend....lost my job...and can't afford to go to school this summer. I don't know what to do. But that poem was more towards the girlfriend aspect. Her and I had been together for 2.5 years and then she surprisingly told me she didn't love me anymore. But if its one thing I have learned in this life of mine, is that I can be resilient and find someone else. Anywho, Again thanks. ~Shawn

| Posted on 2009-03-24 18:39:33 | by Strator - [ Reply to This ] -

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