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    Journal: Dear People,
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    I'm sorry I can not help you with your writing. I don't know anything about anything, so I'm not really comfortable making suggestions about your stuff.

    Hoping for your kind consideration,
    Lacky.


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    Thanks for the words there Marie. I appreciate that. Yea I am going through a rough patch in life. Lost my girlfriend....lost my job...and can't afford to go to school this summer. I don't know what to do.
    But that poem was more towards the girlfriend aspect. Her and I had been together for 2.5 years and then she surprisingly told me she didn't love me anymore.
    But if its one thing I have learned in this life of mine, is that I can be resilient and find someone else.

    Anywho,
    Again thanks.
    ~Shawn
    | Posted on 2009-03-24 18:39:33 | by Strator - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    That's Okay. Oh, incidentally I double-checked "expounded". I think "expanded" would've been the right word, as "expounded" is more to do with theories and the like. Anyway, thanks again for your comments. -Alex
    | Posted on 2008-12-12 14:59:54 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey there,

    Cheers for your comments on Ducks. Yep, "expounded" was the right word, but I did say what colour the ducks were: "yellow beaks", "oily white feathers".

    Thanks for taking the time to write the review, as I wasn't too sure about Ducks.

    Cheers, Alex.
    | Posted on 2008-12-08 09:48:13 | by alexboy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You misunderstand me, but do not worry. The only noteworthy thing I said was 'Nice to meet you.'

    Et c'est tout.
    | Posted on 2008-12-03 05:38:08 | by OrigamiLover - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Either you've just pulled a damn good bluff out of nowhere, or you speak the language and I've misinterpreted your quote as being a random word.

    Either way, nice to meet you.
    | Posted on 2008-12-02 02:09:12 | by OrigamiLover - [ Reply to This ] -
      


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