--Elite Writer Alias: LadyChaos Name: Stoli Roses ASL: 19/F/DE Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 69 Life Story: Dying since 1988. [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks, I know what you mean by the cutting and the depressed poems being overdone, and oversyaed. but to me, it just feels weird to right about something thats not about that.
I don't think you sounded preachy, because your advice was personaland i like that. i alos do "get help", my poems may not be the best you've read, but they are a substitution for me. i go staright to my notebook, when i feel like it. I won't let my mom or any of my family members read my peices because of what i write about, i don't know anybody on ES personally, so i don't mind if you guys read them.
I do feel like my poem was forced, and oversayed, but it were written years ago, when they weren't used constantly by other people.
Thanks a lot, i've never actually admitted it, people just found out.
well actually you should read other poems of mine...the vast majority of my writings do in fact stem from my greater emotions...i have many deep dark poems as well as high hopefull beautiful poems.....check 'em out....like for exhample "Faorgt Ors" "border of the broken" "omitt" "desolate words" and thats just to name a few.......well enjoy! :p
u didnt offend me at all....actually , honestly, i wrote that in under 10 minutes as are most of my new poems...i will edit it now...but the way it ended was to show that it wasnt ending,.,,,,,,"I" wanted to die but could not ......"i" just simply went crazy...too insane to cope...too insane to off myself....so i was left alone, miserable....anger got the better of me.....the irony was in fact that this is the opposite of how i will really die, if so.