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I never said there was a certain formual for writing, I said your post was not particularly well-written. Having good energy and being in touch with your emotions is an integral part of being a writer, but only a fool would say it's the be all end all. There are other things to take into account such as oppinion, perspective and craft.
Any person can put their heart and soul into something and still have it turn out rubbish, a good poem is much more complex than saying it comes from your emotions.
(Your post was not rubbish by the way, I said I liked it)
Some people are too arrogant to edit their own writing because they think it may hamper their genius, or else they're just plain lazy. Your post was interesting, especially as it kind of read like spoken-word, but your writing in general can be clunky because you get carried away with yourself. This is not a bad thing, but you could excercise a little more control over how you get your message across. This is standard stuff anyone would tell you, I'm not being patronising, I actually think your work is vibrant, but you could work on sorting out the flaws. Other people have probably said this to you.
Anyways, good luck with the writing, I got the point. Your probably not into critique. No problem.
thanks alot for commenting on my poem "The Fog" Im really glad u think its good. I was afraid people wouldnt be able to graspe the point. :) thankkyou.
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