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Hi,
Long time no speak. Are you well? Amy |
| Posted on 2011-08-16 20:17:22 | by cuddledumplin - [ Reply to This ] - |
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I like your suggestions and will consider "blooming". Sorry to be so long responding, been rather hectic here. I very much appreciate your input. Cheers~Chris
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| Posted on 2010-12-29 16:50:05 | by ponykeeper - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Hi and thanks for the critical look. I've reinstated my original first line in hopes that it addresses the problem you see with the tenses. This started out as almost twice the length and I am wondering if I have pared away too much.
I'm going to keep 'moaning' for now because smouldering is too sibilant, and too expected, and moaning emphasizes the 'm' sounds in the rest. Thanks again for your input, it helps a great deal. ~Chris |
| Posted on 2010-12-13 18:42:27 | by ponykeeper - [ Reply to This ] - |
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nice one.
thanks for intercostal muscles mate and yes, the small ones get overlooked don't they? except by those that know their worth. it's never a bore to feck about with words and that is why i'm stil here on this bench i guess - it's not a bad place to come when you've got something to say - or not... take it easy, k |
| Posted on 2010-12-06 15:25:43 | by Awkward - [ Reply to This ] - |
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hello mate.
same old bunch of crooks hanging around here you'll note. you've posted; i'll be taking a look. as angelo said: it's a bench... take it easy, k |
| Posted on 2010-11-22 23:41:31 | by Awkward - [ Reply to This ] - |
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Thanks for stopping by. Each to their own in regards to belief, nothing more. Cheers.
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| Posted on 2010-11-17 00:54:17 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] - |