--Elite Writer Alias: Lilithe_Aislin Name: Lilithe Aislin ASL: 20/F/OH Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Blog:[ Blog ] Days Away: 69 Life Story: death [ Ignore User ]
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Though this is probably long over due, over time, I've thought about your commentary on my piece "A Melancholy Tune" and now I'm ready to reply with an appropriate response, however belated it might be. :)
You may wish to review your critique before reading forward, as I will get right to the point: one of the things you noticed that other commentators didn't mention is the fact that the piece flowed with energy, certainly not melancholy at all, as you said. This is a mechanic I hoped to bring to life in this piece contrasting imagery, ideas, and feelings, stopping and restarting suddenly but effectively (hopefully) while ending in an almost somber tone if you will. So thank you for recognizing that point and hopefully it helps you gain clarity from the confusion that was conveyed in your criticism. :)
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