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    "And I'll never need to see the sun again, there's enough light in your eyes to light up our little world."


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    Featured: A Poem About Drowning

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     North Star Over Korea
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     Obscure Allure
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     Antipathy
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     Translucent Dreams
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     Finding Solace
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     Vermilion Romance
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     Murder, Murder
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     Broken Hearts and Abrasions
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     Lament
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     Immortal Love
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     Featured workA Poem About Drowning
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     Sleepless Nights
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     Crimson Lullaby
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     Where We Started
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    ha! yup me too. (great poem though)
    | Posted on 2008-01-29 19:59:54 | by eno1 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    e e cummings-

    | Posted on 2008-01-27 20:14:24 | by eno1 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks a lot for your comment on "your kiss" =]
    | Posted on 2008-01-23 18:11:38 | by love_confusion - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Though this is probably long over due, over time, I've thought about your commentary on my piece "A Melancholy Tune" and now I'm ready to reply with an appropriate response, however belated it might be. :)

    You may wish to review your critique before reading forward, as I will get right to the point: one of the things you noticed that other commentators didn't mention is the fact that the piece flowed with energy, certainly not melancholy at all, as you said. This is a mechanic I hoped to bring to life in this piece contrasting imagery, ideas, and feelings, stopping and restarting suddenly but effectively (hopefully) while ending in an almost somber tone if you will. So thank you for recognizing that point and hopefully it helps you gain clarity from the confusion that was conveyed in your criticism. :)
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 06:14:00 | by Dolor - [ Reply to This ] -
      

    Well, I am an American and US citizen.

    I love my country too.

    I think that communications transfers ideas.

    So, we have two different view points here.

    We see the world in different shades of gray colors.

    Yes, we have different foundations of beliefs.

    So, that is a good thing.

    I come in peace and I am not here to change a person's belief.

    However, we have freedom of expression here

    Anyway, here is an interesting thought:

    Does light shine on the truth?
    | Posted on 2008-01-01 07:49:22 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Very well. Yes, we are all descendents of Adam and Eve. Then who fruit are we?
    | Posted on 2007-12-31 11:02:05 | by FireFly747 - [ Reply to This ] -



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