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    Journal: dirty dishes
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    Mood: Pissed
      
    The little girl who cried wolf:

    An attention whore thought it would be hilarious to call out for help, crying out saying that she was being "Raped".

    People came, and found out that she'd been lying.

    The next day another girl had called out for help because she was being raped. No one came to her side.
    So. . .
    what have we learned?
    Keep your MF mouth shut if it's not really happening to you.



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    I've never been a fan of going back and editing a work. But then again, I don't take my stuff that serious. Ha.

    But even so, I'm glad I could help.

    Anyhow, you are welcomed for all your comments. I'm tired, so I can't really write any witty you're welcome remarks and try to seem all cool. Haha.

    toodles!
    | Posted on 2010-04-01 00:59:26 | by Dark Dann - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    You are most welcome, I'll probably go back later and comment on it. I'm not sure if I have already. If I have, never mind.

    I read your poem out loud to a friend. It's one thing to sound poetic on a page, but if it's out loud and it has that tone to it, it's great in my mind. Yours had it here and there.

    Keep up the good work, my friend
    | Posted on 2010-03-27 21:03:32 | by Dark Dann - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thanks for the thanks.
    i havent commented for ages on this site because evrytime i do people get grrr at me for not telling them how perfect and wonderful their pieces are. i always try to be positive but i also think its important to encourage people to make the most with their words... if people hadnt had challenged me when i first started writing i wouldnt have grown at all

    if you do revise that one lemme know... id be keen to check it out and see where you went with it. and thats funny that you've never heard that song before though it prolly is a lil before your time if youre 15 haha [wow that makes me sound like a grandma haha!]

    peace out
    | Posted on 2010-03-21 04:29:59 | by Someones Epiphany - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    <.< Am not! I'm an Orange Lin. An O.R.A.N.G.E. Ahem, and besides; I got married!! So, hah!
    | Posted on 2010-02-25 07:40:28 | by Orangejuice - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    C'mon Lin.. T_T Be merciful...it's hard >.< and I'm not exactly brave.
    | Posted on 2010-02-21 21:56:58 | by Orangejuice - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Lin.....go jump in a ditch with alligators in it! D<
    | Posted on 2010-02-21 21:47:27 | by Orangejuice - [ Reply to This ] -



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