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Journal: back again -------------------------------------------
Mood: Brain Fried
I haven't been on here in ages! But I'm taking a creative writing course and we've been doing poetry, so it made me think back and remember that I had an account here. I just got my midterm portfolio back, so I'm thinking of posting some of that stuff here.
Thank you very much for the comment on GCSE english.. Did you want a free sketch by the way.. If so PM me the details. I tried quite hard with that but in the end, ended up submitting faries death <.< A longer version though.. I got a B+ so its all good The teacher said if I submitted that piece as my final piece I would have gotton the same mark >.> But I put more effort in to Faries Death so I submitted that. Meh.
Anyway many thanks for the comment and I feel happy that it met my criteria for a gripping story that captures and draws in the reader to the last word.
Haha sorry it was short. My sister wanted me to go rent a movie with her so I had to wrap it up really quickly. Takara lives in a world called Rama which means 'pleasing' in Sanskrit.
Thanks for the comment, later on today perhaps I will continue the story.
Haha, actually, yes they have told me that. And I would've gotten sent off, but thankfully my pet blue, mutated flying fish saved me! And thank you for you opinion on "White and Red Castle". That's what happens when I'm not fed for a couple of days, lol. My picture came from Photobucket under the Keyword "Emo" hehe. Keep it sane!...haha, j/k
Thanks so much, but oddly enough that's the exact advice I give people for writers block, lol. I am good with that stuff, just like you, but for some reason can't give MYSELF advice. Uhg, thank you so much, I will try writing some words down about things I like.
And it's cool that you like the rain a lot, so do i. It reminds me of home.
I think the brainstorming words was the only thing I don't tell people while giving advice, so maybe that's the one thing that can help me.
Let's hope so, because I have been stuck for about 2 and a half months now.. and I'm dying.