Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    --Elite Writer
    Alias: Localfreak
    Name: Nobody The Unwanted
    ASL: 37, Maybe, Here
    Website:[ Website ]
    Days Away: 0
    Life Story: Once upon a time..
    [ Ignore User ]

    Favorites: 5
    Forum Posts: 0
    Shoutbox Posts: 0
    RP Posts: 0
    Signup Date: 4412 D
    12.09 Years 1.21 Decades
    147.07 Months 630.29 Weeks
    4.412000e+8 Heart Beats
    -There you go eggman

    nav
    nav

    MSN: localfreak@hotmail.com
    [ Communicate asdf ]

    Recent Favorites:
    Words by closetpoet
    Barnhouse Blues Reel by Passionbyapathy
    To Cut by tOXIC_wAST3
    "Candy Wishes" by Mandolin
    Ask and Ask and Ask to be Forgiven by AptPupilofLife2
    View all Faves

    Featured:
    Lay Down



    [ + RSS ]
    [ + Google It ]
    [ + My Yahoo ]



    Currently Stalking: toxic_wast3, modestyb, inkonspikuous

    dotsLast 20 Submissionsdots

    Featured: Lay Down

     Hidden feelings
    :|| V: 712 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Venting : Class : Lyrics :
     Obsession mk2
    :|| V: 911 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Depressed : Class : Lyrics :
     Darkness
    :|| V: 665 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Satire : Class : Poetry :
     You look fine to me
    :|| V: 721 | C: 0 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     I hate you
    :|| V: 667 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Life
    :|| V: 1163 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     K
    :|| V: 1058 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     walked away
    :|| V: 1090 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     T.I.A.P.T
    :|| V: 917 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Comedy : Class : Poetry :
     Mother?
    :|| V: 1109 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Peanut
    :|| V: 706 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
     Bypassed
    :|| V: 849 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     the one to fall
    :|| V: 1089 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Metal man?
    :|| V: 936 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Romcom night
    :|| V: 1071 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Deceptive at best
    :|| V: 933 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Poetry :
     Jaguar Smile
    :|| V: 1143 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Lyrics :
     Quiddity
    :|| V: 1360 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Lyrics :
     Bambi
    :|| V: 1340 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Misc : Class : Lyrics :
     The janitor
    :|| V: 735 | C: 1 ||:
    ::Serious : Class : Poetry :
    List All...





    ||| Messages |||
      
    I miss you.
    | Posted on 2016-03-16 09:40:50 | by inkonspikuous - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for your read and thoughtful comments on Shadows. Sometimes you lay it out with a rhythm in you head that may not be read that way.
    Thanks, again.
    | Posted on 2016-01-13 16:41:04 | by closetpoet - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on Equations. You were spot on. I am a Christian and as with most controversial perspectives I very much enjoy putting that in my writing. In the physical world it is simply met with opposition. Any time it is brought up I get accused of being preachy or close minded. Which is hilarious to me. When I was a kid it was rebellious to not be Christian, as an adult it is rebellious to be one. I'm not trying to complain. I simply enjoy the freedom this format allows me.

    Anyways, again, thanks!
    | Posted on 2016-01-12 10:48:04 | by lori_tab - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for commenting on frozen. my grammar is horrible. I just had to ask my husband if it was er or ar at the end of grammar. I don't proof read anything I just type and submit. it seems you are not the only one that is put off by lack of proof reading. I appreciate that you took the time to read. I feel like I just might go back and fix it like you suggested. thanks again. take care

    joez
    | Posted on 2013-09-21 10:04:32 | by joezwells - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi. Re Tiny leaves in the rain. Leaves can't catch the rain, it drips off. But the same rain is sucked through the tree ultimately to the leaves.
    | Posted on 2013-04-01 09:46:43 | by strike three - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Just a message from me to you,

    to tell you that I disapprove,

    of closed minds, people who cannot take,

    a single piece of critique, they fake,

    that they know many pretentious words,

    and how to put them in simple verse,

    though what comes out really make me chuckle,

    the words of which are complete debacle.....
    | Posted on 2012-11-27 09:17:56 | by tOXIC_wAST3 - [ Reply to This ] -



    Format Text?


    Forum id=#32943

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Linger written by saartha
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Giving written by jjd
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    What happens written by Wolfwatching

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry