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hey hun thank you for your comment on my poem The Sun and Moon, actually the reason it sounds like that cause it was wrote by me and Michael... i guess i forgot to say thta in the discripton lol
thank you for the comment on my model poem: the other. yes it should be perserverence at the beginning thanks for catching that...as for the structure it was modeled after Peter Cooley's poem The Other. As for the poem it is about my uncle who commited suicide and the hostility is aimed at his wife...so the change is probally related to me getting pissed off as i wrote it lol