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    Journal: Want To Sleep!!
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    Mood: Sleepy
      
    Right now, I'm in my school, waiting for my mom to come and pick me up, maybe in half an hour she'll arrive. I'm so sleepy right now, but I can't sleep here, it would just be weird and uncomfortable, since there's no bed, no pillow, and no care bear to hug. There's a few people here, but I don't know them, so I guess I'm alone. I think there's a soccer match on TV, but well...Mexico isn't playing, so I don't mind. God...I'm so hungry, I can't even remember if I ate breakfast today, but my stomach feels so empty. Not much happened to day, I achieved eye contact with these gorgeous guy...but that's it...and I guess that's all that is going to be, because too much shit happened. Since I used to be more stupid than I am now.
    This is all I have to tell, well about today. Oh, I almost forgot, today I made a fool of myself in math class...so stupid. Well, that's it.


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    Thnx for your comment. I am glad you liked it. Yep - there is something hidden in there! I vaguely had Lucifer in mind and people who relate to him: maybe unconsciously, maybe not willingly but still their actions speak of the dark butterfly on high. I suggest check out Tribute to Lucifer and the clearing-up follow-up in Lucifer’s Lament and you will understand. He actually was the most beautifully created angel and that brought him down. Bring the three poems in conjunction and you will see. Enjoy school its worth it. Will check you out. uv JM.
    | Posted on 2008-02-13 02:33:34 | by Joachim - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Gabriela,

    I'm glad to have been of help. It is, I believe, my turn to thank you for the comment on "A Kiss in my Sleep". I'm glad you liked it cause I figured I'd gotten a little bit rusty.

    Thanks again,

    DeepDreamer2008
    | Posted on 2008-02-12 12:00:10 | by DeepDreamer2008 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hey i was reading your earlier poems and i noticed a few changes in your style, later ones were much more mature, all of them were good though, and i tried commenting them but for some reason i couldn't. the comment box wasn't there and... does this happen here often or did they just do it to me. i'm not really on here much i post stuffs on myspace, you can check it out. myspace.com/rtotheeazy

    ~Remy~
    | Posted on 2006-12-22 00:00:00 | by TheDarkKing - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on Morning.

    I do have to say, that it was probably my favorite peice to write

    Wishing for more
    ~Brian
    | Posted on 2006-12-12 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem 'Into The Night'. Really glad that you enjoyed it :) I don't honesly know where it came from, I just kind of sar there and wrote whatever came to mind, and luckily it worked!
    Thanks again, take care :)
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by Poétic Harmonie - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you so much for the nice comment. I'm really glad that you liked it. And I think you basically understood it.
    It was just about me wishing that I could get rid of all my pain, and find happiness. The reason I called it an imaginary wish was because I believed that it would never come true. That I would never be able to be happy and enjoy life.
    So yeah, your guess was pretty close. Except in the poem, I'm wishing, not wondering about the future like you said.

    But I am also glad that you can relate to it.

    Thank you again for the comment
    ~Piper
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by PiperH - [ Reply to This ] -



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