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    Mood: The Usual
      
    It is such a glorious occurrence when your love and adoration for something can grow from where you previously thought that no growth was possible. It is similar to a mother grasping her newborn child in her arms knowing that she could love her child no more, because surely the human heart cannot contain such quantity of emotion; only to wake the following morning to realize what she previously felt was shadowed by her newfound love. This is what has happened to me, in a way. I thought that I had given all I could to my music. I had nothing left to offer, I had laid my heart on the line and my music had always been there, always loving me even more.
    I sat in the practice room today, sweat dripping from my brow, working harder than I ever had before, when a realization hit me that what I felt was only the tip of a glacier in the ocean. While still enormous in itself, it does not even compare to what is below. Today I discovered what it is below me; I fell in love with music again. The experience revived me and made me whole again.
    For some time I had been questioning why I played music. Why I would give so much into something, without promise that it will work out. I found the answer today. The truth is, it is because I can everything I have to my craft, and that won’t ever be enough. Everything I give to my love, it can give back to me. And yes, it can be frustrating, just like any relationship. The difference is however, that as long as I have faith in my music, it will never let me down. I have poured every part of who I am into this relationship, to the point that we cannot be differentiated. And right now I would have it no other way.


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    I thank you for stopping by once again. Truth be told, my sister sent me a silly little poem and it inspired this as a witty responce. I mean... Yea, I was totally going for the whole deeper angle of how we are all unblemished to begin life and we become stained.

    I guess I layer things even when I do not mean to.
    | Posted on 2008-10-14 21:22:24 | by nicodemous - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you
    ^-^
    we are all here to share and/or improve
    i was on the phone with him when he read that and he was silent for a long moment...then the first word he said was "wow". i take that as he liked it
    | Posted on 2008-10-14 14:35:46 | by rubymoon - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    makes sense. take care and best of luck with all that.
    | Posted on 2008-10-14 06:23:26 | by ever - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    thank you for your comment
    ^-^
    i most probably wont do any more editting as i already gave it to the person its dedicated to, but i would like to know which parts felt forced and so on...
    so i can improve upon my writing in the future pieces
    | Posted on 2008-10-14 01:22:08 | by rubymoon - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    did I thank you for your comment on my work> I only vaguely remember, but if I didnt, THANK YOU!!!! (and for the fav add, very honorable!)

    Take care,


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    | Posted on 2008-10-12 13:28:55 | by screams - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    My composition,"Nostra Dame" (Our Lady) is about The Blessed Virgin Mary and the conflicts she found herself up against because the populace thought she was covering up for having sexual relations out side of marriage of which the penalty was stoning to death. Yes, she faced many causticals just as the earth is facing now because of our inattention to protecting it. If our God had chosen another era besides that of the Greek and Roman who had their gods and goddesses coming down from Mount Olympus to have sons and daughters of humans, then surely Mary would have been stoned to death along with Jesus in her womb. As you know, the Greek and Roman gods have all passed into oblivion since they were of human mythical thought. But,the God of the Jews and Christians is the One and Only God who does not derive His existence and power through the ideas of humans. Thanks for your read and comments.
    | Posted on 2008-10-10 03:29:00 | by realpoet - [ Reply to This ] -



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