--Elite Writer Alias: Lynda Name: Jane Doe ASL: 26/F Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 12 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
Favorites: 3 Forum Posts: 0 Shoutbox Posts: 0 RP Posts: 0 Signup Date: 1400 D 3.84 Years 0.38 Decades 46.67 Months 200 Weeks 1.400000e+8 Heart Beats -There you go eggman
Thank you so much for commenting on Pressed Flowers. After a helpful critique, I made some changes and posted a revision today if you'd like to read. Smiles, Sharon
Thanks for commenting on "Sorry Parents" I was thinking about your critique and thought I should send you a message. I am not sure myself what I was thinking when I was writing that. But I guess by the last line I am denying there is any hope, even for the fleeting moments in which i expressed how much it mattered that they werent effectionate and neither was I, I never did believe that there was going to be anything to change that. Because we both never truly cared to change anything.
Thank you for commenting on "Well of Love". It means alot that this poem be wonderful, because it was written with more feeling and meaning than anything else that I ever written before. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks again.
Thank you And I am sure that you will. There is no way to describe the feeling for your child. Tbe first time you touch them and hear them breath and cry it's a feeling like there are no words to describe. Thank you for your thoughts and your time I appreciate it greatly Always Heather '