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Welcome,---I like your submissions, but have been busy these past few days, and had no time to comment. Things are slow around here anyway, and i don't check in evryday--but I wanted you to know that I like your poems--especially the sonnet. The Bagpipes intrigued me also,--I know it's either a LOVE or HATE relationship for most people--but I liked your presentation--it covered both perspectives--- anyway--more about which later-- Take care and write on. Silver