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    Journal: long time
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    Its been a long time and i've been on here a long time.

    I've been thinking of writing more, but thinking is all I do.

    Happy new year, even though we're 13 days in. :)


    ...Created 2009-01-14 05:19:50     [ View Past Journals ]

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     About Me
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     I've got a case...ch. 2
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    ::Misc : Class : Story :
     I've come down with the case of the Hit and R
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     Tell Me What You See
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     Decay
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     Part One of Two: The Problem
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     Star-crossed but never meant to be
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     Nobody's Home
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     Let's Dance
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     I love you
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     Confidence of a 5yr old
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     Featured workTo Be or Not to Be
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     Ignore
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     I miss you
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    Thanks for the comment on Remedy Point man :)
    | Posted on 2008-09-06 14:44:32 | by Passionbyapathy - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on 'Rhyming Days,' I'm glad it doesn't come off as trite or cliché as it sounds to me. It is rather cutesy, but I suppose I'm allowed to write one of those on occasion Thanks again!
    | Posted on 2008-04-17 23:34:42 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi again, thanks for comment oN "fallen fence"!

    Funny I wasn't even thinking about remembering. It's about coming to where you used up all you strength coming to, then looking over the barrier you couldn't cross before ... it's gone, but a new person not the old will be crossing it. Well I should have just written that, instead of the poem, and I'd better try and make the poem clearer!!

    Trouble is, I love it. The verseform is so neat ....

    Maybe you got the real meaning of it and I didn't?
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 22:49:51 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hi Maki, thanks for comment on "versemaking".

    Both commenters said the same, so I got a lesson. I was just fooling around, writing them, but hey, it turns out they're both about finding the interesting dreaming in ordinary things.

    Truth is so ordinary that I sometimes wonder if there's any truth in it.
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 22:31:18 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    No problem, I am excited to read more of your work. I'm glad my comment was helpful. Have fun with it... I read "Tell me what you See". I think I shall go comment, I just wanted to brood first. Anyways, have a wonderful day.

    :) tennisfuzz
    | Posted on 2008-01-07 17:34:48 | by tennisfuzz - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    I just went back to an old comment of yours about "Fay's Fairies" ... because Fay hasn't seen it yet! and I want it to be a good plain pretty poem. Anyway what I want to say is you give damn good comment Maki. Told me just what to work on ... once I got round to it!
    | Posted on 2007-12-16 21:16:26 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -



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