--Elite Writer Alias: Maki Name: Lauryn capozzi ASL: 17/ female/ home Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Education ] Days Away: 3537 Life Story: Summarize. [ Ignore User ]
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Thanks for the comment on 'Rhyming Days,' I'm glad it doesn't come off as trite or cliché as it sounds to me. It is rather cutesy, but I suppose I'm allowed to write one of those on occasion Thanks again!
Funny I wasn't even thinking about remembering. It's about coming to where you used up all you strength coming to, then looking over the barrier you couldn't cross before ... it's gone, but a new person not the old will be crossing it. Well I should have just written that, instead of the poem, and I'd better try and make the poem clearer!!
Trouble is, I love it. The verseform is so neat ....
Maybe you got the real meaning of it and I didn't?
No problem, I am excited to read more of your work. I'm glad my comment was helpful. Have fun with it... I read "Tell me what you See". I think I shall go comment, I just wanted to brood first. Anyways, have a wonderful day.
I just went back to an old comment of yours about "Fay's Fairies" ... because Fay hasn't seen it yet! and I want it to be a good plain pretty poem. Anyway what I want to say is you give damn good comment Maki. Told me just what to work on ... once I got round to it!