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Journal: long time -------------------------------------------Mood: The Usual    Its been a long time and i've been on here a long time. I've been thinking of writing more, but thinking is all I do. Happy new year, even though we're 13 days in. :) ...Created 2009-01-14 05:19:50     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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Thanks for the comment on Remedy Point man :)

| Posted on 2008-09-06 14:44:32 | by Passionbyapathy - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the comment on 'Rhyming Days,' I'm glad it doesn't come off as trite or cliché as it sounds to me. It is rather cutesy, but I suppose I'm allowed to write one of those on occasion Thanks again!

| Posted on 2008-04-17 23:34:42 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi again, thanks for comment oN "fallen fence"! Funny I wasn't even thinking about remembering. It's about coming to where you used up all you strength coming to, then looking over the barrier you couldn't cross before ... it's gone, but a new person not the old will be crossing it. Well I should have just written that, instead of the poem, and I'd better try and make the poem clearer!! Trouble is, I love it. The verseform is so neat .... Maybe you got the real meaning of it and I didn't?

| Posted on 2008-01-07 22:49:51 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi Maki, thanks for comment on "versemaking". Both commenters said the same, so I got a lesson. I was just fooling around, writing them, but hey, it turns out they're both about finding the interesting dreaming in ordinary things. Truth is so ordinary that I sometimes wonder if there's any truth in it.

| Posted on 2008-01-07 22:31:18 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -

No problem, I am excited to read more of your work. I'm glad my comment was helpful. Have fun with it... I read "Tell me what you See". I think I shall go comment, I just wanted to brood first. Anyways, have a wonderful day. :) tennisfuzz

| Posted on 2008-01-07 17:34:48 | by tennisfuzz - [ Reply to This ] -

I just went back to an old comment of yours about "Fay's Fairies" ... because Fay hasn't seen it yet! and I want it to be a good plain pretty poem. Anyway what I want to say is you give damn good comment Maki. Told me just what to work on ... once I got round to it!

| Posted on 2007-12-16 21:16:26 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -

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