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Maki

Name: Lauryn capozzi
ASL: 17/ female/ home
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Days Away: 4528
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Signup Date: 6827 D
18.7 Years 1.87 Quote:
Why don't they pass a constitutional amendment prohibiting anybody from learning anything? If it works as well as prohibition did, in five years Americans would be the smartest race of people on Earth

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Rhyming Days by saartha

Requiem to an Adulterer by wordslinger

The Last Thought I Ever Had by hyproglo

Aestas by AlmostEloquent

The Last Letter Home by itinnmannn
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To Be or Not to Be

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Mood: The Usual

Its been a long time and i've been on here a long time.

I've been thinking of writing more, but thinking is all I do.

Happy new year, even though we're 13 days in. :)

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Self Conscious
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About Me
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I've got a case...ch. 2
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I've come down with the case of the Hit and R
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Tell Me What You See
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Inserpts
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Decay
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Part One of Two: The Problem
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Star-crossed but never meant to be
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Nobody's Home
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::Longing : Class : Poetry :

Let's Dance
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I love you
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::Angst : Class : Prose :

Confidence of a 5yr old
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::Comedy : Class : Rant :

To Be or Not to Be
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Ignore
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::Venting : Class : Poetry :

It's not goodbye but it still hurts (revision
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It's not goodbye, but its still hurts
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I miss you
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My thinkings (random quotes)
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I know who I am
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Thanks for the comment on Remedy Point man :)

| Posted on 2008-09-06 14:44:32 | by Passionbyapathy - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the comment on 'Rhyming Days,' I'm glad it doesn't come off as trite or cliché as it sounds to me. It is rather cutesy, but I suppose I'm allowed to write one of those on occasion

Thanks again!

| Posted on 2008-04-17 23:34:42 | by saartha - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi again, thanks for comment oN "fallen fence"!

Funny I wasn't even thinking about remembering. It's about coming to where you used up all you strength coming to, then looking over the barrier you couldn't cross before ... it's gone, but a new person not the old will be crossing it. Well I should have just written that, instead of the poem, and I'd better try and make the poem clearer!!

Trouble is, I love it. The verseform is so neat ....

Maybe you got the real meaning of it and I didn't?

| Posted on 2008-01-07 22:49:51 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -

Hi Maki, thanks for comment on "versemaking".

Both commenters said the same, so I got a lesson. I was just fooling around, writing them, but hey, it turns out they're both about finding the interesting dreaming in ordinary things.

Truth is so ordinary that I sometimes wonder if there's any truth in it.

| Posted on 2008-01-07 22:31:18 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -

No problem, I am excited to read more of your work. I'm glad my comment was helpful. Have fun with it... I read "Tell me what you See". I think I shall go comment, I just wanted to brood first. Anyways, have a wonderful day.

:) tennisfuzz

| Posted on 2008-01-07 17:34:48 | by tennisfuzz - [ Reply to This ] -

I just went back to an old comment of yours about "Fay's Fairies" ... because Fay hasn't seen it yet! and I want it to be a good plain pretty poem. Anyway what I want to say is you give damn good comment Maki. Told me just what to work on ... once I got round to it!

| Posted on 2007-12-16 21:16:26 | by Glen Bowman - [ Reply to This ] -

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