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Name: Andrew Brown
ASL: 19/M/California
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Days Away: 5777
Life Story: Born, now Dying
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16.14 Years 1.61 Quote:
We were all put on this earth for a reason, and mine is to crumble society before I lay for my eternal rest


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Hey Andrew. Yeah, I have to agree, whatever it is, it isn't there. I seem to have conveyed emotion, without reason, and didn't manage to explain anything to myself, or the reader. And, as such, yeah, I think it sucks, but that with enough work(and probably some help from my editor/advisor, Nicole) it might be able to be fixed. Yeah, I like those lines too, but not the immage that conjured them. Damned dreams, what's worse, mine don't even bother to wait untl I go to sleep. ANyhow, I still look forward to reading more of your stuff, and, let me know if you want my advice on any of it, I'll be glad to "teach" you, though I can't say that I'm much farther along than you are so far as knowledge of writing goes, I just write what I think needs said, or what needs seen.
Until next time, friend. Salaam.
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