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Hi, If you ever come back, stop by and say hi. I miss you. Amy

| Posted on 2011-11-15 19:42:54 | by cuddledumplin - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for your comments on "The China Doll". The extra 'ands' in the section you commented on are necessary for the meter of the poem. If they are cut out, the meter gets out of pace with the next line, and the poem in general. I really appreciate your reading it and commenting on it! I hope the new year is going well for you.

| Posted on 2010-01-03 15:00:48 | by Ron Cole - [ Reply to This ] -

Heh.

| Posted on 2009-12-29 00:37:54 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -

hey! thank you so much for the watch and the favorites and the comments! i went back and made the corrections you pointed out, so thank you extra for that. (: i really appreciate the feed back and encouragement~

| Posted on 2009-12-28 13:09:01 | by rosecanfly - [ Reply to This ] -

Thanks for the fave and stalk, you... stalker piglet...

| Posted on 2009-12-28 07:36:16 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -

Ok, I'll post it for you then. But I'm rather touchy about it lol.

| Posted on 2009-12-27 04:15:52 | by trinityfinger - [ Reply to This ] -

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