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Thanks for your comments on "The China Doll". The extra 'ands' in the section you commented on are necessary for the meter of the poem. If they are cut out, the meter gets out of pace with the next line, and the poem in general.
I really appreciate your reading it and commenting on it!
thank you so much for the watch and the favorites and the comments!
i went back and made the corrections you pointed out, so thank you extra for that. (: i really appreciate the feed back and encouragement~