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Journal: The End -------------------------------------------Mood: The usual... unfortunately.    After a year with her, I'm single again... Well, it's okay... As Jack White put it on the latest Stripes album "I hope you appreciate what I do... I'm a martyr for my love for you." She deserves so much better than me, and I made her promise not to ever look back... I'm coming to think that maybe this abstract love bullshit is beyond me... I think, seeing my track record with everyone in my life, not just girls but everyone, that I may be meant for solitude. It may be the best for everyone... I apparently enter people's lives like a fucking hurricane, and when I've done my damage I move on... No one can withstand my eccentric, dramatic, dual sided personality... My thorough hypocrisy: Do as I say, not as I do... I'm a fool for believing that anyone could be mine forever... No one can stand me after too long... That, if nothing else, is quite clear to me. ...Created 2007-10-16 15:53:36     [ View Past Journals ] [ View as Blog ]

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actually most of my writing, try monster of the abyss, is a bit more mature, this was meant to be more petulant, more needy than the norm but then, im sure wouldnt understand that some writers can have a range that doesnt lock them into one form im sorry for that xoxo

| Posted on 2007-08-09 11:05:57 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -

Well I'll start by saying I'm surprised you read "Misogynistic". I wrote that on a slow day at work. I liked your suggestions and I am glad you were blunt. I don't see much rewarding in that poem or reworking it, but maybe I will change my mind. If I do, I will most certainly be using your suggestions. The whole "creativity" thing. Certainly, language is something I have lost in my poetry. Nothing really grandeur or interesting, just blunt assessments of my life and thoughts. Anyway, thank you for your very helpful words. -Kevin

| Posted on 2007-07-31 21:27:01 | by Guernica - [ Reply to This ] -

Good morning Meckes, I understand now, I appreciate your time! jen

| Posted on 2007-07-31 20:37:28 | by JenFlynn - [ Reply to This ] -

Hello Thanks for your comments. on"Nature's pet", I appreciated your point of view on asking questions within a text, and the "need" for a bit more subtlety in one's work- the critique, I found,was dead on, and important to me since it gives me another perspective, an other approach that allows me to improve and not dwell in complacency. On "I love you and I'm afraid", well, it is true that 'cold' and 'hollow' have become trite especially "...when grunge, nu-metal, and emo have made their seperate, yet strikingly similar pseudo-existential, semi-nihilistic, completely self-loathing, definitely angsty and rather whiny impacts on pop culture" I have to admit, I enjoy reading that part, and it would be sad and a waste for me to join the rank of all phonies and lazies roaming through this era... Angel

| Posted on 2007-07-30 21:15:21 | by Angel_Sin - [ Reply to This ] -

Good Morning Meckes, Thank you for your thoughts on "A Family Tradition." I will be changing the "Can you see what he can see?" and remove "you understand?" lines. I agree with you. You reminded me of a quote I love, concerning poetry. I think you'd cherish it, seeing that, in my mind, you emulated those words: "You never ask a poet what he means, you tell him!" -Howard Nemerov Also, concerning the capitalization: I do not choose to do that- Microsoft Word does it for me. I do agree with you, but, honestly, I copy and paste my works from the document and that is all. It does it automatically. Finally- yes. I dare not say the word before him. It is too possible. And he is afraid of the word. I wouldn't dare speak about it around him. Once again, I thank you, jen

| Posted on 2007-07-30 20:42:31 | by JenFlynn - [ Reply to This ] -

thanks for the comment on "forever underground" im glad you liked it and i understand what you're saying about the line devision and all that but in this instance i did it on purpose. i understand that no one will ever read it exactly like i do, since i am the one who wrote it, but the capitalization and spacing and lack of punctuation is used to create a specific effect and meant to be read a certain way. but, nonetheless, thank you for the critique i am always appreciative of an outside opinion. peace. Mikey X

| Posted on 2007-07-30 17:22:33 | by Shadia Dark - [ Reply to This ] -

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