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    Name: Chris Meckes Jr.
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    Journal: Come to visit
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    Mood: The Usual
      
    I'll be the big black boot stompin'.
    Everyone you see is rockin'.

    So my recent musical work has inspired a visit to this site... I used to visit twice a day, but busy with school and work to pay for my schooling and a lot more jamming out and writing songs, I've kinda been on hiatus. Anyway, I'm back for a moment, maybe more, and I'm glad to see everything pretty much the way I left it. The talented, though wordy, contemporary romantics, the angst-driven teens, the gloom and doom crowd, the nursery rhymers, the ones who experiment with Northeast Romanian folk meters that take much practice to recite properly, the Neo-Ginsbergs, the guy who uses Middle English to get that extra "poetic" sound, and of course the really really bad ones who can't even take the criticism they need to hear in order to improve...

    Anyway... Keep writing. We're all bad till we're the best, then we're not recognized in our individual lifetimes and die penniless only to be read by every English class in the world 200 years later. Unfortunately, I'll probably never reach that level of achievement.


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    hah thanks. i appreciate it.
    | Posted on 2009-02-17 20:12:20 | by etheror - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Lol.. no I have never done cocaine before and i didnt intend the piece to give off that impression either? Anorectic is not a word yes i know, its not in the dictionary, but i dont care? in my own experience i tend to experiment with words and in some pieces, I like to make up my own not very professional i know... but im much of a free person so i will also freely write..

    Also... lad is not a reference to that of 'male', see where I come from depending on the area you are from, people use different terms for referring to a 'person'. Where I live, quite often the groups of young people refer to each other as 'Lad'... and this being girls or boys.. for e.g. "Hey, how's it going...what's the craic 'LAD"

    Im not trying to present myself as a knowledgeable, well experienced drug user. I dont know much about cocaine, exactly how its smoked, or taken etc, and I don't have much of an interest in kate moss either, and I certainly wouldn't record my findings of a celebrity in a poem from a tabloid?

    All in all I accept your critique, after all thats what the website is for... i will now revise the piece, and thankyou for your time

    Antoinette
    | Posted on 2009-02-10 12:51:49 | by freak_like_me - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    actually most of my writing, try monster of the abyss, is a bit more mature, this was meant to be more petulant, more needy than the norm
    but then, im sure wouldnt understand that some writers can have a range that doesnt lock them into one form
    im sorry for that

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-08-09 11:05:57 | by blu_kittin - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Well I'll start by saying I'm surprised you read "Misogynistic". I wrote that on a slow day at work. I liked your suggestions and I am glad you were blunt. I don't see much rewarding in that poem or reworking it, but maybe I will change my mind. If I do, I will most certainly be using your suggestions.

    The whole "creativity" thing. Certainly, language is something I have lost in my poetry. Nothing really grandeur or interesting, just blunt assessments of my life and thoughts. Anyway, thank you for your very helpful words.

    -Kevin
    | Posted on 2007-07-31 21:27:01 | by Guernica - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Good morning Meckes,

    I understand now, I appreciate your time!

    jen
    | Posted on 2007-07-31 20:37:28 | by JenFlynn - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hello

    Thanks for your comments.
    on"Nature's pet", I appreciated your point of view on asking questions within a text, and the "need" for a bit more subtlety in one's work- the critique, I found,was dead on, and important to me since it gives me another perspective, an other approach that allows me to improve and not dwell in complacency.

    On "I love you and I'm afraid", well, it is true that 'cold' and 'hollow' have become trite especially
    "...when grunge, nu-metal, and emo have made their seperate, yet strikingly similar pseudo-existential, semi-nihilistic, completely self-loathing, definitely angsty and rather whiny impacts on pop culture"

    I have to admit, I enjoy reading that part, and it would be sad and a waste for me to join the rank of all phonies and lazies roaming through this era...

    Angel
    | Posted on 2007-07-30 21:15:21 | by Angel_Sin - [ Reply to This ] -



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