thanks for you comment on "paler shade of me" i usually don't right short poems and well you seem to understand why. that is part of one that i was hopeing for imput on i'm working to complete it.and i really do appriciate the imput
I disagree... titles are most often cheap. The poem should stand alone as it is. It's like saying that the average music score is important to a film. They only put the music in to let you know how you should be feeling at that given moment. I think titles seem to serve this purpose for most people. I almost always use them out of habit. I would agree with you though that a good, well thought out title has eloquent merit. But they are rare and almost never accomplished..