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    Hey thanks for returning the favor and commenting on "Spring of Awakening". That was very thoughtful of you. lol and thanks for recommending the editting, but I think I'm going to keep it as it is...the lines were supposed to repeat since the poem was somewhat of a hidden dialogue and the narrator read it in discomfort until they would reach the words "And yet..". But that's okay We all have different opinions. Take care <3

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    | Posted on 2006-10-18 00:00:00 | by darkrose16 - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, thanks for the comment you probably left a long long time ago, haha. Sorry it took so long.


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    | Posted on 2006-09-02 00:00:00 | by insphered soul - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanx for your comment, but I well tell you that it's a work in progress. I hope to finish it when the music stops playing in my head. While the music plays I write poetry. Thanx again The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2006-08-02 00:00:00 | by Bobby K - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Hey, you, thanks a lot for the feedback. It feels like I never get feedback when I'm on here so yeah. Anyway the character that is "falling out of love" is really me. And it's something I can't help and it's just... well it's sad and the other person(dot dot dot) doesn't really desrve to have their heart broken. sigh. :D smilie anywayz
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