Actually everyone who had critisized me will always be welcomed into another mockery and insults,hahahah kidding, no you're not hated, im very please to have a such brilliant opinion from a real english speaking people in this club, actually Im lack of knowledge about poetry cause if you see my profile, you'll see im not speaking english at all in my real life and in my country, but I always use english only in digital world. And bout my poems, they are just a reflection of me trying so hard to be as genius as Ian Curtis was.
thanks for your comment on mourning. its the first sequel to a poem i have ever written, so i found it really different to try and link them back. i really hope it never becomes a personal issue but m BF is going into the police force. so it well may be one day.