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    On as you are...the comma after "but" is actually a pause that was intended. It was for contemplation. Thanks for the comment.
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by Desolate_beauty - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your comment on Eternal Musings. Actually I put the "that" in the first line to fit the flow because my brain kept stumbling there.
    Anyhow, thanks again for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed that write.
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by Azuire - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for your imput on my poem. And your advice one puncuation is well welcomed. I know I'm not te best at spelling but I just want to ge it out without really caring about the fact that they're spelled horribly wrong. lol. thanks again. Soemthings are best sad without grammer.
    | Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by chilz - [ Reply to This ] -



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