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    The room is the place I'm trapped. My job, my debt, my lack of progress towards my education. It's not a very pleasant room, :-p. Attempting to shatter the windows atm.
    | Posted on 2008-10-03 22:32:06 | by BlazeFlamme - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    hullo. thnk u very much for the comment on "Pain". Actually, the rant was a combination of various painful things that i went through - the hipocrite friend, the feeling of unloved from a guardian and the moronic attitude of a boy who seem so conceited. But anyway, i meant the rant to be of general opinionated so yeah, i roughly guessed where you took your feelings off the rant. And you're absolutely right about cant wait around for someone to save you. It's you know, kinda great that u realised tt bcos i dunnoe, i think some people bcom to hallucinated by the pain tt they tend to forget what matters the most- themselves. i guess what i said is kinda cliché but yeah, u ged wad i mean ( : take care aight?
    | Posted on 2008-03-19 09:53:41 | by rosesrouges - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks for the comment on "We're All Mad Here"
    Yes, I was considering adding more to the poem...but I haven't made up my mind on that yet.
    So far, everyone has loved it the way it is.
    I believe I am going to leave it alone for now.
    I'm still going to keep that last line in there though.
    It emphasizes the whole theme.
    Once again, thank you very much!
    =]

    Stevin
    | Posted on 2008-02-04 09:00:37 | by bleeding-soul - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thanks much for the comments on my poems. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Keep writing man, you rock.
    | Posted on 2008-02-01 20:34:09 | by Keaton Volkov - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Thank you for the comment on "tears of blood" I thought about what you said and you are right the time stamps do take away from the poem - so I removed them. Thank you for being honest enough to point such a thing about to me.

    ~the_truth
    | Posted on 2008-01-29 19:44:54 | by the_truth - [ Reply to This ] -
      
    Those are excellent ideas, but I really do prefer the piece as it is. Thank you for taking the time and trouble, though. I appreciate it.
    | Posted on 2007-12-26 21:46:04 | by Lacrimosa - [ Reply to This ] -



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