--Elite Writer Alias: Morsketch Name: Elsa Doe ASL: 21/F/TX Bio: [ Quick Bio ] Website:[ Website ] Days Away: 41 Life Story: [ Ignore User ]
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The room is the place I'm trapped. My job, my debt, my lack of progress towards my education. It's not a very pleasant room, :-p. Attempting to shatter the windows atm.
hullo. thnk u very much for the comment on "Pain". Actually, the rant was a combination of various painful things that i went through - the hipocrite friend, the feeling of unloved from a guardian and the moronic attitude of a boy who seem so conceited. But anyway, i meant the rant to be of general opinionated so yeah, i roughly guessed where you took your feelings off the rant. And you're absolutely right about cant wait around for someone to save you. It's you know, kinda great that u realised tt bcos i dunnoe, i think some people bcom to hallucinated by the pain tt they tend to forget what matters the most- themselves. i guess what i said is kinda cliché but yeah, u ged wad i mean ( : take care aight?
Thanks for the comment on "We're All Mad Here"
Yes, I was considering adding more to the poem...but I haven't made up my mind on that yet.
So far, everyone has loved it the way it is.
I believe I am going to leave it alone for now.
I'm still going to keep that last line in there though.
It emphasizes the whole theme.
Once again, thank you very much!
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Thank you for the comment on "tears of blood" I thought about what you said and you are right the time stamps do take away from the poem - so I removed them. Thank you for being honest enough to point such a thing about to me.
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